great story, i enjoyed reading it, great

cool story!!

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I never cared for the Mafia as villians, but this was enjoyable.
Loved the epilogue in particular.

The Story is in the C2

not bad, not bad at all. you've got some interesting ideas, and its always nice to get more insight on Shego.

Good story! A little humor, a little suspense, people in character. Well written!

One small editorial note: "prolog" means "before". The word you want is "Epilog".

Looking forward to your next story!

This is kinda cool. Keep the updates coming... I like the banter between the thugs...

Wow, well done! Don't know where you're going with this, but I'm enjoying the ride!