Update real soon and good luck. Hopefully it won't get deleted.
(Thumbs up)

>o< I'm so mad this got deleated! What rules were broken?! Some pretty usless ones, I bet. GOSH! It was just getting good! And it was so unique! Well, hopefully something like this will come again... ;_;

The suspense! Oh please make another quick! I feel like my brain is going to implode! By the way, is your favorite character Falco Lombardi? Because if he is, he's mine, too! Well, Thank you for brightening my day... I can't think of another way to make it better other than to make another page. ;-D Laters!

OMG!! I can't handle the suspense! Awesomeness overload! X-D Man, how do you do that?! What happenens to the people? I can't wait till the starfox characters come in. Please make it soon! :-D

Yay! This so needs doing! I wish you'd continued this. Of course, if I knew something like this was going on, I might deliberately write something dreadful just to try and get admitted...

Good story! The character and the other fanfiction writrs brought to OFUL could be submitted to some form of punishment,such as social services for repaying the reputation damage they caused to Corneria. After that she could go and enlist herself on the Cornerian Academy to learn to fly an aircraft in order to go back to Earth. When on a training mission on space, she would detect a battle going on somewhere and see that Star fox is in trouble. her unity and her would help them, which would enable her to meet falco...

I predict much entertainment in the future of this.

wow... this got deleted i know... almost all of these things ive read got deleted... i dont think they should delete a story where the friggen readers didnt obey the rules and thats it...

i no i haf bad grammer and speling an dat so dont get ubset wit me kk!? (SO... umm... KIWII!)

I know I purposely did all of that crap...

I tried to e_mail you my guy but as usual it didn't work... WAA!

I hope this is BETTER than OFUM... because I actually liked the Fire Emblem one (now deleted) more than the original... hey don't blame me!

That and thats it... good luck... again...

As a huge fan of the OFUM story, I was quite interested in reading this one. I hope you'll come up with a good Starfox exchange for mini-balrogs.

A~R