really good they all are in character great job

I know u wrote this a few years ago, but i haf just gotten addicted to this story and can't stand the mere thought of it going unfinished. So Puh-Leez finish this! It's sooooo good!

Update please!

Alright, this IS one of the greater stories on FF.net. My favorite actually. I see you haven't updated in 3-4 years. :(

And since I have to accept people, unlike me, actually have lives, I possibly understand. I just ask for you to tell us if you are going to continue this. If yes, well you just made my whole entire life 3 times over. If no... well I'll be extremely sad, but will have to deal. I am extremely anxious to know. Thank you for reading this.

P.S I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY!

gumfrog

Please continue this! It is one of the few wonderful fanfics on here!

I normally don't do a long review until the end of a story, so this will be no different.

Please Update Soon because i wanna see how it ends

This story is brilliant and the plot has really sucked me in.

Please you must tell us what happens its just cruel to leave readers with this and not have it completed.

just answer the questions you don't even have to finish the story just tell us what was going to happen.

Hopefully you will decide to finish this story, if not then know that many people who love this story are sad that you have denied them the closure of the story.

You have real skill when it comes to writing

Thx Tom

wow...nyc storie

plz continue it...i wanna see how it endz...

You've got to be kidding me! You just leave it at that and haven't updated it in over three years! You're killing me here! I must know what happens! I must know how it ends! Please read back over your story and keep on writing it. It is cruel and unfair of you to do that to your readers! You leave us hanging and you don't let us know what happens! Does the plan go okay? Does the war end? Is everybody gonna be okay? What about Holly's and Artemis' relationship? How does that work out with the People? Do they stay in the nine kingdoms? What? We the readers deserve the right to know the answers to these questions by you continuing this story! Three years or not, once you have that plot it should never go away! Re-read your story and continue to bless us with your talent to write this story! Please please please I beg of you!

EXCELLENT!

sry was reading and didnt want to stop so didnt review on the otehr chapters...

GREAT STORY! holly/artemis moments gave me the chills as well xD

T_T u havent updated for along long time...plz do so...

realy realy want to know what happens next...

THAT'S ALL! THAT'S ALL! NO! U MUST CONTINUE IT! I REPEAT THE KEY WORD: MUST!

i love it! its so great! you need to make more. hurry up!

This is one of my favorite Arty/Holly stories. You really really really need to update soon. please please please :) :) :)

forgive me if i didn't review the earlier chapters, but i was too busy reading the story... *shrugs*

*scowls in annoyance* i stay up until five in the morning and i'm left at a cliffhanger? and right before one of the climaxes of the story? *mutters* the nerve of good authors...

so, are you going to throw a wrench in artemis's works or no? and what's the convo between holly and butler about? i take it butler notices their newfound relationship too (and possibly connecting it with artemis's blankout a few chapters ago...). what's going on at the rebel camp? did that pixie take the weapon back into the tenth kingdom or was it left at the rebel camp?

by the way, how are things going back home? is time progressing more rapidly or slower? is foaly still working in the ops booth, or is he really spending time in a jail cell? how is everybody taking the news about how sool treated foaly? does anyone know? are foaly's gaurds with him or against him?

*pokes* update soon, alright? you have a lot of stuff to work with, and some background on the new characters would be nice to know. maybe red and wolf talking together about the past would work to make it (more) interesting... ;D

oh, and how's the war treating the other kingdoms? wendall's supposed to be going to a meeting with the other kings/queens to see if they can end the war somehow - even if he knows he's walking into a trap...,

brittney

Oh my goodness! I just love your story... it is amazing.. I hope you finish it because I was and am so totally hooked on it from when i started. To tell you the truth I finished it in one night. Yep I pulled an all nighter.. but I'm really curious about what happens next. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

the story was great! i really liked it and have know idea why u would stop! it was a great story with long chapters nothing rushed everything just gradueley growing until the suppence is nearly to much and then u drop it! u are a great writinger and i dont know why u stopped i doubt u will get back into this cause of me but plz continue!

keep on writing(PLZ) and ill keep reading

Birmi[77