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| snoochie76 2006-11-29 ch 1,  | abusethese r so deep do some more judy toms i love it |
| NuYawker 2005-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I might have to read this again to get the HE at all times. Is the HE ALWAYS Hanson? Or is it that it's almost midnight and I had a LONG day at work and a glass of wine and I should've waited to read this when I was coherent? Either way, I loved the flow of it, I'll just have to reread it again when I'm awake :) |
| chloe 2005-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is brilliant - lovely rhythm in the words and action of the story, and a wonderful portrayal of the effects on H and H of the long-term strain of being a cop. This really doesn't need to be a song fic - it stands alone. |
| daizia 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseThere is so much feeling in this - so much pain and little flickers of hope, and heavy with defeat... What can I say? It's beautiful because it's real. I love it. :) |
| Machello 2005-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow - your writing style is very deep (if you know what I mean). It almost reads as a dream state. I like the "he" and "she", and the story tells just enough but not too much, leaving the reader to imagine the rest. I thought this was a very soulful piece of writing and I really enjoyed it. I hope you write more soon. |