 Myriaddd 2006-12-04 . chapter 1Wow. This story is amazing! I found it randomly while looking at L/M stories (they are my fav) and I found your story and WOW- was I impressed!
I must say, you did a really good job of portraying Mara just the way she would be! I mean, I'm a huge sucker for mush, but if I must be reasonable, Mara probably wouldn't have been all cuddley- mushy- touchyfeely in the beginning. She would have had to "warm up" to Luke. And YOU portrayed that FLAWLESSLY!
You are amazing, and your stories never disapoint!! Yay for JadeLotus01!
-Myriad Daydreams |