Actually, I think this is a very good idea for a story. I find it very intriguing, and I wish to learn more.

May i politely ask what the that was?

::chants:: Write it! Write it! Write it!

Good grief, what's with the delay? More, more! Come on!

Write it! Please!

You go girl! Laurel ( and Katy ) kick serious a** when it comes to writting. Add on but there is really no need to because it's great as it is! Anything that has to do with magic, you can make interesting! Great job!

Please please write the rest of the story!

very confusing at first, but good

Oh, ew. So when will the next part be out?

I think its good but dont kill Lupin. If you do, I'll sic my rabid unicorns on you.

Your story was great better thatn the ones i'll come up with anyway. I can't belive you got this idea fraom The Devils Arithmatic! the werewolf thing was so neat You wrote that story on MSPAP. Cool! (nice job Laurel my sister)

Wonderfully done. I agree that it's rough, but polish is all it needs. The heart (so to speak) is all there. I love the dream in which the killer becomes one with the victim. It calls to mind ancient hunting rituals and is very powerful. When Sirius becomes upset because he realizes that Remus is afraid...that was subtle and very moving. Keep it up and if you want someone to give you a more detailed review of the next draft, I'd be happy to!

Good story...please write a sequal or in btwn part@!

I missed this when it was posted, but it is excellent and *scary*! Love the part about RJL not feeling fear; that was my impression of him too. Please write it!

I LIKE IT A LOT! CONTINUE