That is beautiful! I love it so much. Yea, Veggie! Goten got what he loved, and that makes me happy!

That is a great fic! I loved it! Keep up the great work! The only thing I disliked was Pan and Trunks didn't get together. Cause you said that they would get together witch they didn't or did they? Sorry, I'm probally confussing you let alone my self. lol anyway I give you a 8/10 great job! Well come and read my pathetic fics. ja ne Syaorons angel

That was soooooo good! Another Goten and Bra story! YAY! It's adding up! Very well written! More please!

WPY

really good

You are a truly talented writer, but you do have one major flaw: spelling mistakes. I suggest using spell check more often and finding a Beta reader to look over your work before putting it up. Other than that keep up your wonderful stories.

beautiful...*sigh* Veggie-chan's little princess becomming a member of the Kakarot-clan...poor vegeta...

That brought tears to my eyes. i loved it and your style of writing is great. keep up the good work.

what a gorgeous materpiece of writing...this falls so much into place and understanding of second coming. like it? i loved it!

i't sad and horrible that i't taken me this long to read this fic. but i was so into Sc that i didn't think it would be a match. i'm sorry i made that judegment because this first chapter alone was unbelievably funny, cute and just enjoyable.

WOW!That was a amazing and beautiful story!yOU GO TINNi!I just love Goten and Bra!

YES, I liked it ALLLLOT! nice stuff

Speech is usually done in "Word/sentence", but you have your right to do it your way. You use 'I am' waaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy to much. Try using "I'm". it's funny, but almost every Bra/Goten fic I read ends up with Vegeta kicking the

out of Goten... (pardon my bad language, but it is amusing) Why aren't there any Trunks/Marron fans? They all seem to picture him with Pan. But Bra and Goten wouldn't really work if they were together. It would depend on which ones got together first. If one couple got married, the other couldn't 'cause they'd already be related, unless you have a odd mind, such as mine. Sorry for the flames, but I just had to type my opinion, bad habbit of mine...Kawaii ficcy though...

blue hair!BLUE! Not Green!1

that's so sweet! I recognize some of this from second coming. definitely very good and well worth my time .

I loved it, beautiful