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ThatLittleBlondeAngel
2006-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWow! This is really good! Actually, all of these are really good!^^ Fluff rox sox! (especially royai fluff!) Well, it would be nice if you would update, but trust me, I know how time consuming high school is! Please TRY to keep it up!
narukami
2006-02-09
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease u[date!
Yipster54
2006-01-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it! I really loved Private Van Frei (it's so fun to say that name, tee hee)! And I love how much Havoc is in it, he's gotta be my favorite character!
Sheo Darren
2005-09-25
ch 1,
abuseWhat the question should really be is: "Will Havoc actually land Alistair by the end of the story?"

Seeing Havoc's previous record, I'd say no.

^_^

Still, wouldn't it be nice to go that way? What do you think?

To quote Al: "Want to bet?"

Cute! More, please!
Nasa Maxwell-Yuy
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuse^_^ Loves it lots! More please! And try not to make your OC such a stiff-**, K? Dankuviel!
Love: The Maxwell Siblings, freaks that we are! JA!
Shadow Dreamer 27
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was excellent! You have to update!
Tsuiraku Nami
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abusehehe...that was funny...hehe...me likey
gundams forever
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was great update asap! you are one of the best wrighters ever! update soon please!
asymmetricalcircle
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseAhahaha! That's hilarious!

Update soon!

d(^^)b

~SK
Flye
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseWoohoo!! omg... riza nd roy are smexing each other in the office! well... thats not a surprise.. we know that they love each other, they just dont show it...:wink wink: lol.. great story! really looking forward to the next installment..
Demon Slaying Riza
2005-09-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseTHAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED! UPDATION!! UPDATION!!
Soul's Eclipse
2005-09-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseLove it!
x.X.x YoiU x.X.x
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseoh my god! you need to keep going, cause this is going right to my favorites list! and my alerts! go you!
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