so good!

aww this was soo cute! cant wait to read the next chapter! loved it! love the secrecy and love the intimatcey.

Very graceful and well-written! Amazing characterization and the ever-loved element of longing. :D Love it!

that so beautiful! thank you

This was so beautiful... Thank you for writing it and posting it for me to read.

Your writing is lovely and your drawings are beautiful.

Ah, my dear: "How I love thee, let me count the ways"... This is an incredibly beautiful peice and I'm not sure how I missed it before now. I'm sorry that you had to bring my attention to it!

I don't want to say this will be the greatest fic of your life, as I expect more from you ^_-, however it is definately the greatest of what you have posted. You have sown the beauty of art into this piece, thread by thread.

There is such a soft, romantic tone to this that it's just absolutely amazing... Like looking at a painting of the countryside... all peaceful and endearing to the soul trapped in the city.

We'll let a little honesty slip in here... I was not so sure of the ending the first time I read it. I thought it rather abrupt. However, as I was reading it I was being distracted so I sat down again today to read it once more and provide you a proper responce =) And now that I have no distraction and read the whole thing start to finish--I must say it's even more beautiful (and the ending more fitting) than I had thought previously.

You have certainly outdone yourself with this fic, Eli-chan. HOWEVER, I know you have thoughts of a SereEndy fic and I want to see that one. I think if you committed as you did to this one, you could write an amazingly intricate, passionate, and yet subtle fic. Which are the strong points on this one, btw. =P But, as I'm rambling, I'm going to say this was absolutely marvelous, my sweet, and I hope to see more of your art--either medium.

This story was amazing, adorable, beautiful, perfect. There are so many words to describe it but so little use. I loved this story. It was very well written and I envy author's like you, who can portray their feeling so well. Ii wanna read some more stories that you've written, so keep it up!

Cool chapter update soon!

Love it ^_^

it was beautiful. totally beautiful... one of the best fics i've read. very nicely worded... very endearing and very very sweet. great fic, dudette. =) hope to read more of your stuff!

Wow. So very, very eloquent. And romantic and mushy and all that stuff I adore. I enjoyed this story very much.

So SO sorry I missed this second (last? -puppy eyes for sequel or eplilogue-) installment. You know my excuse, which is no excuse at all, really. o_o; But...yes. I've read. I love. ^_^

Honestly, this is one of the best QUALITY fics on this site. Your vocabulary and expressions, detailed descriptions of their inner feelings, just the WAY you write in general is so professional and awe-inspiring. And no, I'm not saying this just because you're my online friend, in a sense. (Yes, right? -more puppy eyes-)

I think the poetry adds to the overall tone of the writing. Of course, everybody has different opinions. That's just mine. ^^;

Again, if I had to cut and paste my favorite parts, we'd be here all day. Um, how about this? I'll send you the url to lead you right back to this page. With a huge arrow pointing at it, with a sign underneath that says, "Kara's Favorite." Okay? Does that work? Because I can get started on that gigantic arrow right now...-gets out cardboard and neon lights- o.o;

It's so romantic. And sweet in all the right places, with a bit of humor but just overall EMOTION flowing throughout every word. You're such a talented writer, Eli. :D Your work is so touching...on a deep level.

And now I see what you mean about the rose bit. ^_^ Great minds think Roses, eh? xD I honestly didn't know you put this here...but I give you credit now. -hands over legal document that says "Eli's Credit" with her signature on it- X3

Great job on this! ^_^ Of course, an epilogue would be nice. Not that the story needs one, I just want to see more of your work. Heh. But I can understand if you'd rather leave it. I feel that way about some of my works...-cough- O.o;

Anyways, I bothered you enough, hm? I sent you an e-mail...and if you didn't get it that means I sent it to the wrong person. In which case I am fully responsible. xD Er, whoops? o.o;

-Kara

Once again, your beautiful writing enchants me. The bond that Usagi and Mamoru share is so intense and described wonderfully. I enjoyed the thoughts as they give more insight into the characters and just add to the poetic rhythm of the story.

Thank you SO much for including me in your dedications. I can't tell you enough how great I felt reading my name among some of the most extraordinarily talented fanfic writers I've come across.

Looking forward to read more of your work!
Merry Faerie

This was AMAZING! Poetic and flowing and with some of the most beautiful descriptions I've read in a long, long while. Elegant indeed!The fresh, loving interaction between Usagi and Mamoru was captured perfectly and I just hope you write more soon!

Merry Faerie