UPDATE SOON! XD

I love it, love it, love it!! Wow, you have such a way with words. The chemisty between the two is amazing and when you read this you feel like you are actually there. The action in the story is great! Please, Please, Please, update again, it's beautiful!!

omg! this is really good so far! o...I bet Domanai wants him because...you know *wink wink, nudge nudge* you know what i mean ai?! *goes into full Eric Idle mode* lol, but really, this is great, i tell you, all of your stories are just brilliant, i cant wait for an update for any of them! oh! did you get my email btw? sorry to bother you about it *blush*

~Oni

I'm so glad that you finally updated this story. Marco being all gangsta, lovin' it. It was too funny when Eric (hate the name) screamed like a girl when Dylan touched his back, such an idiot; this caused our poor Marco to get grazed by a bullet, he ought to be burned alive, lol

Though I'm wondering about Marco's friend Melissa...did you name her character after our authoress friend Melissa? just wondering.

Anyways, I can't wait until those two hook up. It's going to be a wild ride.

Once again, good chapter. Can't wait until the next update, I'm so lovin' this story.

Okay. So. Since I'd only read the first, like, 3/4 of this chapter and the rest of it I'd never seen, I am going to leave you a review, even though I totally suck at them. K? K.

First of all...as you know...love that you made one of the stupid people named Eric. Jade

I loved this chapter but you already knew that. =] It's a fun story, I should have some of my own or more of my rich girl when i get home. =] I want to see your comments. And look melissa reviewed. XD anyways, i'm gonna go now seeing as i'm in class. this is great, and you do need to write more, bee. i'll push you. XD. anyways. talk to you later this after noon. ^_^

Please write more, love. It's great. I don't want to have to start nagging you again. It's tedious and tiresome to the both of us. Granted, I haven't updated in a while either...

Oh, hi Pot. I'm Kettle. Nevermind. *blushes*

Great story, love the mob angle. Can't wait to see how Dylan and Marco finally get together.

The threat of assassination always works to get me to review. Damn you for knowing my weakness. I must mention that I love my name in connection with an Italian vixen...

Don't know if you planned it that way or not but hey.

You did a great job, as per usual. I'm glad to see that you are still writing. I've missed you and Lucy.

I'm as much to blame for being MIA. I've been a little busy. Write to me soon and I promise to respond. I'm not sure which email address you are using anymore.

Love always,
Melissa

Excellant story. I hope you continue with the next part soon. I can't wait to see how it all the intrigue turns out.

Thanks!
sara

I've enjoyed this so far... love the premise! Picturing tiny little Marco as a hardcore mobster was a bit of a jump for me at first, but you're doing quite well setting the scene and filling in Marco's character. Keep up the great work!

I don't think that I've ever reviewed one of your stories before, but I'm sure that I've read most of the work posted on You are one of few keeping the Darco alive, and I'm very gratful for that.

I can't even describe how excited I was to see that you've written another Darco fic. And I was again completely blown away by what you had created. The plot, the characterizations, the dialouge- its brilliant. I really don't think any other words can describe it. So... great work and Please countinue!!

This is really good so far, very well written. I am interested to find out the same thing Dylan wants to know.

seems gud.
a lil confusing.
but still gud.
continue it.

Wow ! Where do you find all these different plots ?! You always suprise me. This story is beginning very well and it is written with such precision. But this nothing new coming from you ;)

Continue your magnificient work, oh Darco Godess !

Now /that/ is a cool idea. Very, very interesting. I like it a lot. Can't wait to read more!