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QuinzelxHarleen
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseI totally agree that they should deal with normal human stuff i.e. "that time of the month." This was brilliant. I liked his reactions to her in this one, and I like the fact that he wasn't a complete jerk to her like most men are when stuff like this happens. Overall this is a great piece, two thu
Kichi
2007-11-11
ch 1,
abusepoor harley i feel her pain right at this very moment and it sucks **.. at least I have pain killers but really whoever heard of a criminal who couldn't find drugs. she is a slacker
SaJi
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abuseAw...it's almost kinda like fluff. *heart* What am I saying? It is pure Mistah J fluffs. X3
the thing
2006-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abusenice story. you really put them into character well... well, it was good.

lol i just think it's hilarious when he says 'WHAT!'
JokieStarchild
2006-09-15
ch 1,
abuseWoohoo! I knew you had it in you! This was really, really cute. I really like how you explored Harley's internal monologue and the Joker seemed in character while being sensitive. Good job! I could really see this coming out of BTAS, the Joker is so much more tame in that universe and Harley fits in there so well. Too bad the comics don't do enough for the curvy jester we love. You didn't have to be all blatant and you still managed to explore the characters without diminishing interest. Bravo! Personal preferences aside, I do agree that Joker has a sort of fondness for Harley because she gives him undivided attention TO AN EXTENT. I must aadmit, altough I'd ratehr see Harley strike out on her own a la 'Harley's Holiday' and 'Harley and Ivy', I liek the interaction she and the Joker have especially in Harlequinade.

Harley Quinn-hardly quits! Pricless!! LOL

Well, end of rant. Good job my dear!

CC
none
2005-10-19
ch 1, anon.
abusegood job
Don't got an ID
2005-09-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseEveryone of your stories make it feel like Christmas...

...Except the French one... But that's only because I can't read French...
Thyme In Her Eyes
2005-09-26
ch 1,
abuseFresh salad cologne! XD

About time an animated girl had to deal with normal female biology! ;)

Gosh, I think I'm going to have to echo everything Mitsuka already said. Again, for such a short piece, you put so much into it, and your portryal of the relationship. The way you explore the unconcsious need in this relationship is wonderful. I've never really seen another J/H 'fic (with one or two notable exceptions) explore that before. And you hit the nail right on the head with how the Joker needs Harley - you portray and explore that aspect of their relationship beautifully. How is it that you can show Harley being frightened, rejected, hurt, abused, ignored, shut out in the rain, being underappreciated...and yet, while I really feel for her, I love their relationship all the more? The Joker's subconscious need of Harley makes it all seem worth it, in a way. It's a sick and twisted romance, but very beautiful too. You show that.

You give me the impression of a writer who really puts thought into her characterizations, and as a result you do an excellent job. You give us the characters as we know them but tell us something kinda new as well. Your Harley is adorable and endearing and, as Mitsuka said, the Joker is such an unpredictable character (and as a result, rather difficult to write), but you really capture his nature in this. A highly enjoyable fanfic.

As for your question in your endnotes, I think any of your ideas in "Ace Puppet" would make interesting stories. Personally, I'd also *love* to see you try something dealing with their relationship back when Harley was Dr. Harleen Quinzel, too. :)

Happy writing!
Kelly Renee
2005-09-26
ch 1, anon.
abuse*takes a breath* O_O Very, very nice! The Joker is one unpredictable character, and you're handling him PERFECTLY. The whole idea of Harley being 'Ill' is really interesting too!..and different!

No matter how evil, sick, and twisted the Joker is.. he needs Harley.. So far, that seems to be the main theme of your stories, and I LOVE it.. cus it's true. I've read many Joker&Harley fics and you're the ONLY one who really EXPLORES the characters.

btw, thanks for emailing me! Keep up the great work! =) *hugs*

OH, here's my deviantart page-- home sweet home.. hehe..
http://mitsuka.
Girl-Anachronism89
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuse*Blinks* Whoa...I love how you did that! Showing another side of Harley. What would happen if she was "ill"? Great job!
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