This story is really quite amazing.

Sadly you do not see too many xovers with a Ranma Nibiki paring with Sailor Moon.

I have to say The story structure is really good. No grammar problems or if there were any, they were quite small.

It is sad to see that the story has not been updated since 2001.

Hopefully your muse will come and make you write a couple of chapters.

Anyways keep up the great work and thx for the story.

this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue!

this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue!

Canon Nabiki is not a nice person. I would sit and watch if she was drowning. Kasumi I would save but canon Nabiki? No. That said I think your Akane is even more extreme than canon. Still its an OK story that I hope you finish one day.

Not bad. Ciao

just out of curiousity though (sorry if i can't spell that well, or write a fuckin fic for that matter, lol) when are you going to update this fic and that of those of your other fics... just wondering anyhow... lol

Ryu_Vision

oh buy the way... even though this one is kinda old and all.. and you might know this by now... but this is a Wheel of Time game for the pc... just thought i'd let ya know... but nice fic by the way...

what a time to stop writing

yo

can u up-date some time soon and if u r or where studying vetanaryin medacin can u give a 10th grader some vadvice on it?

Very interesting i hope you will continue this story.It would be a shame if you let it go to waste.

This really is a great story with one of the most original premises I have ever seen. You showed a lot of talent by posting this all in one night, and I must say you did an excellent job, made the characters seem as true to canon as possible, and proved your talent as a writer.

I must say your story has left me salivating for more, as well as triggered my own ideas for the stories I am working on, feel free to read and judge them.

I do hope you return to this story, assuming this review finds you. It is a same when stories like these are abandoned, they show such promise and are left to die, some readers wanting to make their own versions but fearing reprisals.

I hope you continue.

Innortal

It took a few seconds for what she was saying to sink in. Then Ranma began

hitting himself in the head repeatedly. He couldn't think about Kasumi like

that. She was like his mother

LOL!

Did you flunk out of college?

I'm still waiting for an update!

She still got a kick out of remembering how easily Ranma had tricked

Ryoga into signing those papers to have his name changed to Milfred.

LOL! I want that side story!

Cologne out for revenge? Well it will keep things interesting.

Hehehe. Great authors notes.