Reviews for Darkness Ahead

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Blackdex 2007-08-09 ch 7,	abuseNot bad. Ciao
Ryu Vision 2007-02-08 ch 7,	abusejust out of curiousity though (sorry if i can't spell that well, or write a ** fic for that matter, lol) when are you going to update this fic and that of those of your other fics... just wondering anyhow... lol Ryu_Vision
Ryu Vision 2007-02-08 ch 6,	abuseoh buy the way... even though this one is kinda old and all.. and you might know this by now... but this is a Wheel of Time game for the pc... just thought i'd let ya know... but nice fic by the way...
0K0 2006-11-12 ch 7,	abusewhat a time to stop writing
Nightcrawler2000 2006-04-18 ch 7,	abuseyo
Amenita Virosa 2005-08-18 ch 7,	abusecan u up-date some time soon and if u r or where studying vetanaryin medacin can u give a 10th grader some vadvice on it?
Enigma 2005-06-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseVery interesting i hope you will continue this story.It would be a shame if you let it go to waste.
Innortal 2004-12-04 ch 7,	abuseThis really is a great story with one of the most original premises I have ever seen. You showed a lot of talent by posting this all in one night, and I must say you did an excellent job, made the characters seem as true to canon as possible, and proved your talent as a writer. I must say your story has left me salivating for more, as well as triggered my own ideas for the stories I am working on, feel free to read and judge them. I do hope you return to this story, assuming this review finds you. It is a same when stories like these are abandoned, they show such promise and are left to die, some readers wanting to make their own versions but fearing reprisals. I hope you continue. Innortal
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 7,	abuseIt took a few seconds for what she was saying to sink in. Then Ranma began hitting himself in the head repeatedly. He couldn't think about Kasumi like that. She was like his mother LOL! Did you flunk out of college? I'm still waiting for an update!
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 6,	abuseShe still got a kick out of remembering how easily Ranma had tricked Ryoga into signing those papers to have his name changed to Milfred. LOL! I want that side story! Cologne out for revenge? Well it will keep things interesting.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 5,	abuseHehehe. Great authors notes.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 4,	abuseIt's not surprising that Cologne would know what was going on. 300 years lets you find out many things! grin
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 3,	abuseAkane doesn't learn does she? She just keeps bouncing back and forth. Great chapter.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 2,	abuseI wouldn't say they were acting ooc. The dream and memories from the dream are lingering not to mention someone is messing with their heads. So for all that they are perfectly IC. Nice emotional chapter. Covers a lot of territory.
dogbertcarroll 2003-10-08 ch 1,	abuseHehehe. Nabiki wants a dominate Ranma. bopped him over the head with a chibi-mallet for no apparent reason except for his being alive LOL. That just sounds so cute. Nice work with Nabiki. Great hook.

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