Great story, but i doubt i could of looked past such a betrayal but then again Harry is more light sided than any person isn't he? It's what we aspire to be but can't exactly reach.

Sorry i was just musing i guess, anyway great story. :)

Yeah I really liked the way you wrote this :D:D I really don't like the fics where Harry turn evil due to resentment so thank you for not doing that :D:D but I dunno, Harry forgiving his friends?? Suprised me a bit really ^^ Keep up the good work :D

I've reviewed on this story before but i just re-read it and I've got a few comments. First, great idea. Really interesting and I honestly love a Dark Harry :) anyway this story was pretty powerful in some parts but honestly you flopped on the final battle. There was none of the intensity that i expected. In the beginning there was so much power behind everything that seemed to happen but then when it really counted...nothing. There was very little detail about the battle between Voldemort and Harry and almost no emotion about finding out Ginny was the traitor. Come on...you are a way better author than that, it shows in some parts of the story.

I liked the story, although I'd have preferred if Harry took a longer time to forgive his friends. But then they had to fight together and perhaps this is enough justification for any amount of trust. And as I love that they do get friends again, I'm not really going to complain.
Ginny as the traitor? I admit that I first thought of George with having lost his twin brother but not his desire to live. Of course, I hadn't thought about the fact that he voted 'yes'. I would have preferred Hannah (or Dean) to be the traitor, but that's just because it would have hurt less. But that's perhaps exactly the reason why you chose differently. By the way, do we get to know when exactly she changed sides?
It's a pity you didn't let any of the Slytherins survive. I'd have loved to see Draco or Snape in a situation like this. But, of course, it's your choice and it was wonderful the way it is.
I'd really like to know who married Harry? Luna? I'd love that, she's a wonderful person and just doesn't get enough attention in most fanfictions (and the original works, really).
The only thing I really don't like about the story are the names of the children. Honestly, Truth and Faith? But as that's only a minor detail and very easy to overlook, I want to say wonderfully done and thanks a lot!
ai

I don't agree with the story but I liked it. I would have obliterated each and everyone of those...UGH! I hate them for what they did. But then again it would have been worse if there had been dementors. And yes he forgave them to quickly. And I notice you said he lived among muggles but not that he married one. I personally think it was Luna. Am I right? Will there be a sequel where you tell us? That'd be great!

This is an amazing tale of withstanding friendship. I agree with your note at the bottom of the final chapter of the epilouge, even if others say differently. A friendship can survive betrayal, and this one did. I really like your personification of Ron, though. So many fics out there make him the bad guy. Even if he did get jealous in canon, I just can't see him hurting Harry, Hermione, or the rest of the wizarding world in general. That dratted Ginny...


Okay, usually I like her, but this Ginny is not the one we all know and love, is it?


All in all, great job. Hope you continue to write fics!


~~Ashleyia Days~~

awsome that was really good i would say apdate soon but it seems you already have

Interesting story but

this doesn't make any sense! Okay he was framed... Why would he hate everyone? Bitter? yes. Angry? yes. But this is over the top... you make it sound like every single one would know the truth and just throw him to azkaban for fun...

I mean come on.

I have to admit. This story made me cry, and I am not a big crier. It was the very last part that did it. Remus, the last marauder, and the Trio's friendship. Plus the babies names. Hope and Faith. It was great to read. Thanks for writing it.
-Haley

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

OMG! JUST LEAVE IT WITHOUT TELLING WHO THE MOM OF FAITH IS! HOW COULD YOU!!? AGH!! That was a great story though... I'm so sad it was ginny...o jeez..

I LIKE THAT HARRY FORGAVE THEM! I just hate that it was Ginny.. oh, poor poor harry.. he never knew he loved her. :(

NO FRICKING WAY!! I STILL DON'T BELIEVE IT WAS GINY! BUT OMG! THAT'S SO GOD!

NO FRICKING WAY! I DON'T BELIEVE IT! AH NO

YAYYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYYAY who is it? I'll have to find out! btw I love how hermione just woke up normally and stuff.. very cute