So she turned on the death eaters? Lovely.

And suddenly I'm sorry for a murderer.

Great story, I can't wait to see what tom will learn next and how far into the dark he'll go. And what about the scars on his back, is he secretly the boy who lived, but then why does Neville have the title? I wonder if Voldemort suspects blacks identity or merely wanted to find out information on his mother and Snape.

If it is too easy than its no fun. All storys are better when their hard to write.

I always did like helena bonham carter.

*le grins* i loved the last part XD! Bella's awesome and so is Sev :3. I wonder about Antares...he's really, really almost OC but I love him all the same. :P and what's with the Boy-Who-Lived business?

Wonderfully written, can't wait to read the sequel :)

I can't wait to read more

Antares is bloody brilliant. i hope to read more! i can't begin to express how utterly fabulous this fic was...but i will admit despite all my stupidity, that were some parts that a little bit dragging. but its okay, antares awesomeness made up for it. XD

great job! and keep it up

-Tsuki

Woo!

Agh! Should have never put this aside for so many months :(

This story is really good. I love the characters of bella and antares so far, though im very confused by the ollivander scene, because i dont recall reading what antares' wand core was, only that it was of birch

I have really enjoyed this story so far, it is a refreshing new idea to read and pretty well written to boot, thank you for taking the time to write it:)

The first half of the chapter didn't flow very well and it was hard to fallow.

I really, really hoping this fic doesn't fall into that slash crap so comonlly found in this part of the site.

Love the show.

First, wow. I've been reading this story for a while now, and I'm just struck by how incredible it's been. Usually I avoid slytherin!Harry stories because they're usually pretty awful, but this is an obvious exception.

Your characterization of Antares (I love that name, by the way), Snape and Bellatrix were brilliant. Even though Bellatrix was very different from her book counterpart, I think the transformation was believeable. And Antares, I think, was brilliantly well done, with little gryffindor-nesses perfectly interwoven into his personality.

But the best, I must say, was your portrayal of Draco. It was so brilliant and hilarious and true to the books.

And finally, the plot! I have absolutely no qualms with it. I think you did a brilliant job of reworking the original.

The only thing I can think of that could have been improved was the French phrase you used in, I believe, chapter fifteen. I believe you meant to say Always Right, as in correct, but you actually used right, as in the opposite of left. But that's more the fault if your translating device than anything I could really fault you for.

So, yes, this story has been incredible, and I look forward to reading the next installment.

Amazing work! )