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| ApocSM 2007-04-22 ch 7, | abuseWOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON! |
| Lockblade 2006-06-01 ch 7, | abuseNice job! Better than most fics out there, and I can only find one problem with it. It's been abandoned. |
| Rignach 2006-03-12 ch 7, | abuseI know you are probably very busy but how about an update. It has been quite a while now. |
| William 2005-08-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseGet off your ** lazy ** and UPDATE |
| William 2005-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseLook its been 3 or more years... GET OFF YOU LAZY KEISTER(spelling please?) AND UPDATE! |
| Lord of the Pit 2005-06-02 ch 7, | abuseThis is cool. i rather like how this is comming along. Please update whenever possible. thanks from your faithful reader. |
| Bobboky 2005-03-08 ch 7, | abusevery good, it is a very good idea and you have developed it so far pretty well, i wish there was more |
| Kara 2004-06-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh, that is a very creative and great story, but when you have some time to spare can you please update a last this fan fiction. I really wan't know what will happend next. |
| Fear 2004-03-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseI really hope you update this story soon I want to know what happenes next. |
| The Nameless Author 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abusehey i love this fic, but i want to know when you plan on making more chapters? i mean really it is an amazing fic and i want to see more of it. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-30 ch 7, | abuseThat part about practicing in the construction yard and explosions must mean that the girl was either a very skilled martial artist or a hobby demolitionist *grin* I love that description; Hobby demolitionist! Within another minute Ranma's apology was playing repeatedly in Satori's head, along with various pictures of Ranma that Satori had mentally cataloged. There, that had to work. LOL. Why did you abandon this one? I liked it. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-30 ch 6, | abuse Well we can be sure it's not his sex drive, but what was it? Now he would have to be immensely careful, or somehow, he would end up with another fiancé. That would be bad. Ranma Satome Grandmaster of the understatement! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-30 ch 5, | abuseHow can you bribe a teleporter? He could make much more freelancing and thieving himself. Not to mention creating his own home anywhere on earth and maybe off of it. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-30 ch 4, | abuseI don't know it seems more like the cubes searched for people who had personalities that would fit their powers. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-08-29 ch 3, | abuse"Well that went well," he told his new training partner, a now perfer- ated titanium dummy, who he had affectionately named Ryoga. LOL. |