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| Stygian Styx 2007-12-02 ch 3,  | abusegood.. but are you ever going to update? |
| ApocSM 2007-05-01 ch 3, | abuseWOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON! |
| Adeptis 2007-03-25 ch 3, | abusegreat story so far ^^ |
| Opt1mus 2007-01-19 ch 3, | abuseI know you quit writing this story a LONG time ago, but you have recently been active, can you PLEASE at least add some closure to this story? I have always liked it but I was very disapointed to see it never finished... |
| a 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abusesorry but the dude's quit writing. |
| Princess Asuna 2006-10-22 ch 3, | abusegreat story so far, just one tiny question though WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED?! lol i wanna see what happens next, and do i sence a nebiki pairing in the future? |
| FairyQilan 2006-06-06 ch 3, | abuseEver finish this story? |
| mikebreslau 2005-08-30 ch 3, | abuseNicely done, but really incomplete. All it needs a a plot and a few more chapters... No really, it's a good beginning,but it's only a beginning. thanks, Mike |
| Delete Here 2005-07-03 ch 3, | abusegood story i always thought akane was psychotic and this shows it perfectly. thats one thing her mousse ryoga and tatewaki share. |
| pug 2004-10-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseyou have to contine this!! |
| Michael The-Zorch Haney 2004-03-13 ch 3, | abuseInteresting story. Ranma is a little OCC here but for good reason. So don't let the Canon Police get you down...they're baka anyway and don't pay attention to the story anyway so ignore them. This is turning out to be a good story. I suspect it will be a Ranma+Nabiki fic. Ah I right? LOL |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-21 ch 3, | abuseSince you seem to be concentrating on elemental magic it should fit in easily with SM. Where's the next chapter you promised us? |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-21 ch 2, | abuse"but Ranma didn't seem like the type that cared that much about, or even really needed, an education." I dont quite get that line. Isn't being a mage all abought knowledge? "You know I would never cheat on your mom, Son," Ranma finally said. LOL! This version of Ranma is definately well schooled in the proper way to taunt an oponent. Nabiki secretly suspected that it was Kasumi who kept twisting the heads off all of Akane's dolls *grin* I love that line and I don't know why. "I have video evidence of the things you do to your poor body" LOL! You may have gone a little overboard with your version of Akane but I think she's perfect comedy relief. "To Akane's horror, it showed her coming out of the sex shop with a bag of stuff." I love this fic! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-10-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It has a strong start. Ranma Nabiki pairing as mages sounds like a nice set up. At least I hope thats how you are running this one. *grin* |
| Inu-pup 2003-03-28 ch 3, | abuseFunny!! i feel sorry for Akane, how humiliateing that'd be. Can't wait for next chappie, write more soon! ^_~ |