   Ranmaleopard 3/21/12 . chapter 3this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue! |
| Ranmaleopard 3/21/12 . chapter 2 this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue! |
| Ranmaleopard 3/21/12 . chapter 1 this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue! |
| GeorgeTobor 12/13/11 . chapter 3 Nice, this Nabs might be a person not a greedy bitch. Continue please. |
| Nearly Indi-cent 7/16/08 . chapter 3 Too bad your not updating, this is hilarious! |
| Stygian Styx 12/2/07 . chapter 3 good.. but are you ever going to update? |
| ApocSM 5/1/07 . chapter 3 WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON! |
| Adeptis 3/25/07 . chapter 3 great story so far |
| Opt1mus 1/19/07 . chapter 3 I know you quit writing this story a LONG time ago, but you have recently been active, can you PLEASE at least add some closure to this story? I have always liked it but I was very disapointed to see it never finished... |
| a 1/14/07 . chapter 1 sorry but the dude's quit writing. |
| Princess Asuna 10/22/06 . chapter 3 great story so far, just one tiny question though WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED? lol i wanna see what happens next, and do i sence a nebiki pairing in the future? |
| FairyQilan 6/6/06 . chapter 3 Ever finish this story? |
| mikebreslau 8/30/05 . chapter 3 Nicely done, but really incomplete. All it needs a a plot and a few more chapters...
No really, it's a good beginning,but it's only a beginning.
thanks,
Mike |
| Delete Here 7/3/05 . chapter 3 good story i always thought akane was psychotic and this shows it perfectly. thats one thing her mousse ryoga and tatewaki share. |
| pug 10/20/04 . chapter 3 you have to contine this! |
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