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| Blackdex 2007-07-21 ch 6, | abuseHahaa, Excellent. Ciao |
| Gelionlegends 2007-07-10 ch 6, | abusewell i like what you have written so far and would like to see this updated again please as reading it was a joy. so i hope you decide to update it as i would like to read up on what ranma does when he arrives at the wrong destination and to find Margret there waiting for him. will he leave her or take her with him or stay with her, though he would be in big trouble if he left her as she went to for their honey moon and he up and left her there goingon about how he had to set things right in tokyo. as he really doesn't seem to listen that well as he is more likely to cause the fancees and rivals to drop what they are doing to attack him. then if he does bring her more trouble as she more likely will get attacked as well but ranma doesn't seem to be thinking right. how far does the porting for the braclets go as i would have thought they wouldn't need to be that far if the old man that owned them only needed to get round his library and to the bathroom or his room so the range would not be that long. what was the sword he picked up in chp3 and has he forgotten about it. though the way you've written it ranma looks to be setting to become a king or something as it would be interesting if with some work he could do what the others are able to do like channers or magi and such. though that reminds me how did ranma know to go for the items that he did as i thought he would also pick up a shield as well to go with the sword. what did happen the the other scouts? how did they die and are yo going to have them come back, plus what about the reason for killing or should that be trying to kill ranma and who wants him dead. well i hope you get round to updating soon please i would like to read more as would the others who have reviewed. |
| Adeptis 2007-03-18 ch 6, | abusegood story. too bad it appears dead :( |
| sparda 2007-02-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat fanfic. Please continue it soon. |
| Lord of the Pit 2005-06-07 ch 6, | abuseNow this is a kick ** story. |
| Chaos 2005-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally great story.Update soon please. |
| Bobboky 2005-03-08 ch 6, | abusethis is excellent, very excellent |
| Mine-Master 2005-02-24 ch 6, | abusei've come across this story like 10 times thru different places like and what not...its really cool! Too bad the author wont update. |
| cowgirl-in-training 2005-01-21 ch 6, | abusei have been waiting like years for you to continue this story but do you,NO! If you don't continue this story soon you shall face my wraith! |
| dragon-game 2004-10-10 ch 6, | abuseGood story. Please continue it soon. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 6, | abuse"Is he insane?" Ranma whispered quietly."The other girls have probably figured out fifty new ways to kill Margaret that no one ever even imagined. And me? They just skin me alive. No big deal, been expecting it for quite some time." LOL. He really has become cynical over the whole fiasco! Not to say he's wrong, mind you, just cynical. *snicker* Satisfied that his relationship with his fellow father-in-law had been firmly established, Kenji went to wash the smell of burnt hair and skin off. Kami knew that Cynthia had blasted him through the roof the last time he had come home with that particular fragrance floating about him. *GRIN* I love that guy! Arrgghh this one is abandoned too?! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 4, | abuseA squad of trained psycho **. Shouldn't that be squad of well trained psycho **? *snicker* "Listen here baldy, if it weren't for me and my friends, this whole ward would be up in flames by now, so you had better lay off and quit trying to tell me what to do before you have an accident of the electrical variety!" Hehehe. Simple yet effective! Kenji smiled. It wasn't quite evil, but it was close."I believe you all know him, his name's Ranma." LOL! I think him and Ranma will get along just fine. Ranma causes trouble and this guy looks like a professional in that field! "Ranma, Kenji is what you would call a pyromaniac. He likes to set fires just for fun. We'll be lucky to find anything left in Nerima besides a lot of ashes." *grin* I'm really beginning to like that guy! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 3, | abuseNabiki Inc. LOL! It's a rule of the Ranmaverse! Ranma is not allowed to be single. No sooner does he lose all his fiancées then he ends up married! *grin* I like Ranma's choice in gear. The crystal bands are going to be a lot more useful then any magical weapon he could find. |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 2, | abuseMousse still in full body cast so you just see Shampoo. LOL! The last time he'd disappeared from Nerima, an unlucky case of falling asleep on the train, troops had been called in to stop the rioting. *grin* Great chapter. I like the twists! |
| dogbertcarroll 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseRanma is wearing something with sleeves? *blink* He never wears sleeves! Well short sleeves but them it'll look like he stuck the lightsaber in his armpit! *grin* LOL. Nabiki nailed Ranma! I can see her doing that. I always wondered if Ranma had any hormones to speak of. At first glance things seem really OOC but if things continued escalating I can see where all this is definitely in character. For example if Akane kept acting the way she did I can see love easily turning into hate. When he finally stopped laughing, thinks to a considerable number of hits to the head, Ranma managed to ask how he was supposed to carry out his task. LOL! You have to love Cologne. Great ice statue! |