this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue!

this is damn awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next and i would love to see more like this. please continue!

The story seems good so far, however there are a couple of problems.

As this story seems to be one of your earlier ones, you need to realize that people are reading your stories and are not able to see the story. This is pointed out in your grammar style. Your newer stories are better but this could be fixed.

The second problem is spelling. I am not a spelling fanatic however it should be fixed a quick spell check would fix 95% of the problems.

As you have not updated any story since 2006 I highly doubt you will read my response, but good luck and keep writing.

Excuse me but in stories like this, why does Ranma not tell Akane to just run off and marry Ryouga. If she spouts about family honor he can point out there are two more sisters. If they do not want to marry him then it is them that cost the honor. Akane is "blameless". That should appeal to the mentality portrayed.

I like Kenji, he knows how to treat Genma-Baka. If you're still alive can you please update?

this is good, continue!

is this story going to be updated? it's good one of the better ones i've read, good plot understandable

i think him having a wife that is NOT insane is a good idea.

I love your works! I read this on Studio Asynjor, so sorry I'm not much of a reveiwer.

it was a fairly interesting story up until this chapter. then the soul-mate stuff came up and it just kinda went to shit.

Hahaa, Excellent. Ciao

well i like what you have written so far and would like to see this updated again please as reading it was a joy.

so i hope you decide to update it as i would like to read up on what ranma does when he arrives at the wrong destination and to find Margret there waiting for him. will he leave her or take her with him or stay with her, though he would be in big trouble if he left her as she went to for their honey moon and he up and left her there goingon about how he had to set things right in tokyo. as he really doesn't seem to listen that well as he is more likely to cause the fancees and rivals to drop what they are doing to attack him.

then if he does bring her more trouble as she more likely will get attacked as well but ranma doesn't seem to be thinking right.

how far does the porting for the braclets go as i would have thought they wouldn't need to be that far if the old man that owned them only needed to get round his library and to the bathroom or his room so the range would not be that long.

what was the sword he picked up in chp3 and has he forgotten about it.

though the way you've written it ranma looks to be setting to become a king or something as it would be interesting if with some work he could do what the others are able to do like channers or magi and such.

though that reminds me how did ranma know to go for the items that he did as i thought he would also pick up a shield as well to go with the sword.

what did happen the the other scouts? how did they die and are yo going to have them come back, plus what about the reason for killing or should that be trying to kill ranma and who wants him dead.

well i hope you get round to updating soon please i would like to read more as would the others who have reviewed.

good story. too bad it appears dead :(

Great fanfic.

Please continue it soon.

Now this is a kick ass story.