welleg 2007-09-13 . chapter 8Great story. I really, really love Eric's line at the end. |
the real vampire 2005-11-07 . chapter 8Oh wow!! Great ending to a great story. I really enjoyed reading this - you guys make a great team! One of the best end-lines I have ever read: 'On one condition. We hide the cars in the back, turn off the phones, and disconnect the doorbell. Just in case.' LOL!
Can't wait to read the spin-off and hope to read more from both of you soon! |
Funky In Fishnet 2005-11-07 . chapter 8LOL great finishing chapter, it really made me smile so much! I can't wait to read more of you guys teaming up! Really fabulous story, thanks for posting :- ) |
stranj100 2005-11-06 . chapter 8Sequel, sequel, sequel. Oh...sorry, I'll try to restrain myself. I loved it. You guys did great. I hope you guys team up again, soon. |
XRachX 2005-11-06 . chapter 8Brilliant. Funny and sweet and just downright awesome. This last chapter is just a mix of aw's and laughs. Fab story and I think I've just found two new slash pairings to follow. Thanks guys. |
robster72 2005-11-06 . chapter 8I love the quote - "You put the master of evil space ninjas in a birdcage?" Very funny! I'm sorry this story's over I hope you two will be writing some more soon? |
AngelMouse5 2005-11-06 . chapter 8An excellent, nice, well written finale to this great story.
I agree with Wes, poor Lothor, stuck in that cage - freezing would be better...
I loved the rapport that you built between Hunter and Eric - mutual respect in their abilities and eventual friendliness...
great work guys, really great work. I will definately want this to be hosted on The Lair. |
Dagmar Buse 2005-11-06 . chapter 8Cute. :)
It's amazing how you kept everyone in character; very well done. I'm really looking forward to the one-shot sequel you mentioned.
(Btw, discovered one typo: "...to bid their farewells, lead by Sensei, who had streaked...". It -should- be "led". *grins, winks*) |
WesEric 2005-11-05 . chapter 8you two did such a great job together on this story, i hope you another one sometime |
Weesta 2005-11-05 . chapter 8Nice job ladies! My favorite line was Sensei's comment to Wes about the power of a kind heart - it was very Sensei and very appropriate for Wes.
This was a really cool story. Excellent combinations of teams, and blending of your own two stories. I'm looking forward to the follow-up with Hunter and Eric. |
CamFan4Ever 2005-11-05 . chapter 8*Giggles* Loved it from beginning to end! Hope to see "Playing with Fire" soon! *Giggles more* |
BJvision 2005-11-05 . chapter 8This was match made in heaven team up, both with the ninja/time force team as well as writing team. Enjoyed this story so much looking forward to reading Playing With Fire.
Why does Eric have to keep making smart ** comments regarding Hunter and his so call come ons. It was just too funny. Great team up once again. |
bloodstar 2005-10-30 . chapter 7I must say, y'all are *really* good at Lothor. He's so funny.
This is a really good crossover. I think you guys pulled it off awesomely. Kudos! :D |
robster72 2005-10-30 . chapter 7Great fight scene and I loved the ending bit with Lothor. Also the dialogue was good and amusing like the bit about the BMX bikes! I look forward to the next chapter! |
Dagmar Buse 2005-10-30 . chapter 7Nice fight scenes. :)
And I like the hamster cage idea. *snicker* |