 FlyingTackle 2009-08-26 . chapter 4Will this story indeed go on forever?
I don't know.
But it's been three years.
Haha.
It's okay, I have faith. |
 Feathersprite305 2008-07-02 . chapter 4(Is too shocked to speak)
Mai: I'm her alter-ego. I must say, you have a way with capturing peoples attentions. Your story is immpressive, point-blank. |
 Lost-in-NYC 2007-12-23 . chapter 4Holy Christ on a cracker, that was hilarious! But I must ask, were you guys on crack when you wrote this? But either way, it was pretty inspired. And gay Takeshi in a dress who likes to be spanked? The amazingness of that will be forever burned into my brain. |
 Lottagoodyaoilovin 2007-07-16 . chapter 4 It seems...S & M outfits are the object of everyone's desire...so would that mean I could use them to RULE THE WORLD? What an interesting concept...I wonder if Kupo would read this too...Kupo'd probably think me insane but...Whatever. I'm sure Kupo's fine with it...Hello Kupo. This is actually me who I cannot say who I am cause it bends the fabrics of existence itself. Why do you question who I am?! AM I THAT MYSTERIOUS?! But don't fret my dear dead bunny. I don't poke you for the hell of it. I poke you for the fun of it. Did that make sense? Hmm...nothing seems to make much sense now that Schizo had to come and interfere. Poor schizo...How many schizos is there in a schizo? I'd imagine many...Maybe I'm schizo too? I can't seem to make the little dust particles move away from my eyes. Is that normal? Hm...Dust is trying to take over the WORLD. I'm sorta scared actually. That is until I remember that they can't cause they're SMALL...Unless they make like little tiny nuclear weapons thet they shoot at us like "pow pow" and we're like "ow ow!" and BAM! WE'RE ALL DEAD!Except for the twinkles...Damn twinkles... |
 Shi-sensei 2006-11-25 . chapter 40_o; I like it in a wierd way.:3 |
 Anime Monster 2006-07-25 . chapter 4XD That was so funny. Poor Daisuke...and yes, I think Mrs. Niwa needs to be put in a straight jacket, even if she's funny. lmao |
 Hello.My.Name.Is.L 2006-07-25 . chapter 3sorry for the general review earlier, i was in a rush...mothers are evil sometimes...anyway i would have reviewed again for chapter 4 (love the title for it by the way^_^) but the stupid thing/machine that runs fanfic wouldnt let me!
anyway this chapter rocked as usual and so much was going on at once i love it when that happens...that saxon guy sounded hot...eh anyway rite more or i will have to hunt you down, tie you to a chair and make you...write...hah you thought i wuz gonna say something really dirty, didn't you?...HAH... |
 Kumori-hime 2006-07-24 . chapter 4Yay! Smut ^^ Me likes. I have never read a crack/smut fic before. Me likes much. ^^ Kevin has to be the only OC I've liked since I dropped them a year ago. ^^ I like to think of him as looking like one of the item twins from FE9. Like, with the green eyes and long blond pony-tail really high up. ><
But I don't understand. Why was Satoshi doing that? Shouldn't he be kidnapping Daisuke to safty? |
 Hello.My.Name.Is.L 2006-07-21 . chapter 4WHE! that wuz fun! i waited FOREVER for this chappie and IT WUZ WORTH IT! YAY! PLEEZE WRITE MORE OR I SHALL DIE! POTATOE! |
 SutekiKage 2006-07-20 . chapter 4LOL! i'm gonna have to say i love this title ^^"
and stephiee! luf! me working on 'that' story!!~~ lolz...kupo...u'll love it ^^
and i sorta gtg...>O
ja!~
=Kage*~ |
 SutekiKage 2006-07-20 . chapter 1OO...I DIDN'T REVIEW THIS CHAPTER EITHER?!?!? AH! AH! AH! AH! (add about a dozen more of those and u'll get what i'm doing) so i guesses i have to start reading at chapter one...? O>O...but...but...i remember READING THIS! gya! @3@ |
 SutekiKage 2006-07-20 . chapter 2o.O...it seems i never reviewed this chapter either...DID I EVEN READ FROM CHAPTER ONE?!?!? ...i donno anymore...>w |
 SutekiKage 2006-07-20 . chapter 3o>O...it seems i never reviewed for this chapter...? OMGASH I NEVER REVIEWED UR CHAPTER THREE! =O!
well...anyways...i loved it! xD, i feel srry for daisuke...and sato trying to convince emiko and all...but failing misrably (sp?) lol...
anyways!! will need to go read chapter 4 so ttyl!! ^^ |
 theaflamed 2006-07-19 . chapter 4haha loved your story especially some of the earlier chapters when he was arguing with himself whether or not he walked the straight n narrow. lol write more! :) |
 Evil Overlord of my Own Mind 2006-07-19 . chapter 4Sorry about the hideous review for ch. 3, yes, but my dad was already starting the car, and I really needed to go buy stuff I didn't need.
*blink*
Need to go buy things I don't need. Cool sentence.
So here I am, sitting in my grandparent's basement stealing their internet after a very long and entertaining drive, which included lines such as...
1: "What's the name of that damn church? Oops."
2: "Pass the logs. No! PASS THE LOGS!"
3: "Let me guess: You know someone from here. And here. And here. And here. And here."
4: "I'll try this... Kouchibouguac. Kouchikouchikouchikouchibouguguguguguac."
5: "So people from Allardville are social lepers. Got it."
This is just more proof that I have the best mother on the planet. But I'm straying from the point.
Which hasn't been sharpened yet.
Have you ever seen a crayon sharpener? All the huge Crayola boxes usually say they have a crayon sharpener inside, and they NEVER DO.
Ah, well. I don't use crayons often, I just like looking at the different colour names.
Some good lines as well in this chapter, but this had to be the best:
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…I like this room. It’s dark and there’s a huge mat on the floor… and… Hot guys are everywhere.
Everywhere…
Suddenly I’m grabbed by this guy next to me, and he starts taking off my clothes.
“I’m Saxon… I’m gonna fuck you.”
I groan, my hard-on getting even worse.
“I’m Olly… and please do.”
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Go Saxon!
...Rather strange name, isn't it?
...And isn't Olly usually spelt Ollie?
Ah, well, their eccentric names add to their glompworthiness.
I need a weird name!
I should change my name to Valentin.
Rather uke-ish name, ne?
Oops: Being called upstairs to carry some stuff outside. Must go.
See? I tried on this review. Go me!
-Adam |