HEY. Listen! I'm going to give you critical feedback!
The introduction is rather random(in chapter one!)After one gets over that, the story picks up and immerses you in a world of strangeness that is not unlike Termina. The things that make this good are the rich worlds and evils that are swimming around in it: I can practically taste the ancient hate and bloodlust of the older Zelda titles. (Although it doesn't have, like, superb graphics or anything, you are correct in saying that the Adventure of Link can be interperated as one of the more terrifying stories.) You have a way with battles and action scenes. Good for you!
I realize that you will probably not continue this, but if you do, I'd like to see some psyche of Link action. The ice and the ants battle and death scene was awesomely horrifying. It and the rich "Dark world/Dead world details makes this whole thing worth reading.
If you'd flesh out your spontaneous beggining, this could be awesome.

Ah. I started reading this (and finished it) a very long time ago and was waiting for you to update again before leaving a review. Please don't give up on this- it is so good and so much better than most of the other fictions on here.
Link and The Dark Link (based from Zelda II's monsters trying to claim Link's blood... I always liked that detail) duke it out in Dark's brain. I loved the personal touches of Dark asking Rosaria to choose a hand- of course the left hand is the honest one. Heh! How can a great fairy not know of the Evil King and the myths of Hyrule...Now, let's start writing and see who wins the war, shall we? Please?

dude you gotta finish this. i mean, i'm no one to talk about finishing things but this is great i really want to see what happens or maybe you just wanted it to be a cliffhanger, in that case i ask you to make a sequel. SO many unanswered questions, but i guess thats the point of a cliffhanger just plz finish this or if you already did PLZ make a sequel, or if you just got bored of the plot, tell me! i'll understand. i just need you to give me some sign of if your gonna do more or not T_T

NO! DARK KILLED LINK NO!NONONONONONNONONNONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!

Aw why are Dark and Link fighting it makes no sence there praticly brotehr some waht TT_TT oh well get stroy sorry i haven't commenting on every chappy i'm just lazy ^^

Link's not going to be dead for the rest of the story is he?
I cried when he died, it such a horrible way to die...it even gave me nightmares...But it's one of the best I've read!

I like the detail of the battles, very nice ^^.

This new dead world seems interesting, it's pretty obvious who the fairies are but not how they got there...

Could this person in the basement be Link? Or someone I forgot about? XD

Great chapter, the beginning of the war was really well written. I like how you've stopped the thingies from swimming, gives them a weakness.

I liked the argument between Tael and Mohan too, funny XD.

NIce chapter loving it!

Oh noez!! Will Dark Link end up killing Link or will Link somehow escape with his life? Who knows?!! XP Eh, I'm just kidding, but great chapter. That's all I can say, really, because this one was just as good, if not better, even, than your other ones. I love the overall dark feeling of this fic. It's very rare that you find Zelda fics that are written like this one, so nice job with the dark aspects of this fanfic! I can't wait to see what else happens! Hopefully, we can see a nice showdown between Link and his 'dark' self. ;)

o that's sweet!

Woah...so they're going to capture Tael and sacrifice Link?!! Man, I must admit that I didn't see that coming. I think there was something that was even hinting to something like this happening (such as the mentioning of the jungle people making sacrifices earlier in the chapter) and yet I still didn't see this coming. This could turn out to be quite interesting. I can tell that the climax for this fic is either coming up really soon or is already beginning now. This thing is going to go out with a bang, that's for sure! XD Well, yet again, you had a flawless chapter here-it was perfect. I love this story and I can't believe that I haven't done this sooner...but I'm adding it to my faves now. *adds* I should've done that a long time ago. Silly me! XD

Ending so soon and i was just getting into it lol

You know, I have to compliment you on your writing skills because this story is VERY well-written. I seriously think that it's one of the best fics in the Zelda section due to its depth and descriptions. It has a lot of interesting plot twists as well and the plot itself is a very original one. I don't really have anything else to say, really, because this fic is great and I don't really see any problems with it. This just keeps getting better and better and I can't wait until the showdown with the Fungistuls! Keep on writin'! XD

This was really good please update soon