This is such a good story, but it's nothing but dialogue. I can't connect with the characters, I can't feel what they do. Maybe you could try to revise this? Please do! I really like this story!

I'mgoing to keep reading no matter what!

WOW! GREAT story! I LOVED it! It was SO CUTE! It gad the perfect amount of drama in the begining, bu then it got all happy! And I LOVED the twist in the ending! Are you gonna make a sequel? PLEASE! _

AWSOME! Your a good writter.

i love it so far 8D

yeea i'm to lazy to log in and write a good review so here ya go. good story... night night... z

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I just noticed that you use character names from your old stories in your new stories.

Like in Bathing In Blood, you mentioned Kane who was Mika boyfriend in A Pain That Feels Good.

&& In Scream in the Night (this story) you mentioned Kanaye, Gina's youngest brother.

I think it's pretty cool. Well back to the story.

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i thought inuyasha and kagome would be at least a little bit more upset about the rape but i still liked it!

SO KAWAII THIS STORY

-GBABAY808 FROM OAHU

Love it so far, cant wait to read the rest

of course u end it now! make a 2nd one or somethin! GREAT STORY!

how the hell does inuyasha know about brain cells? well good story! who is tat man in the bushes whos always hidding! naraku or koga mabye?

ok well im only on chapter 11 bout to go to chapter 12 but this better not turn out like inuyasha the movie 2 cuz if it does ill cry(not really but the guilt trip works on my mom so hahaha

Inspiation is Everywhere

Kenny Wright

Amazing! I started reading this like last year-but i stopped and forgot where i was so i never finished it...but then I re-read it all today and LOVED IT! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL! THAT WOULD ROCK SO HARD!

right a sequal please please please!