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Eleatic 2008-09-30 ch 9,	abuseMy response to realising that there were no further chapters to this story- "NO!! Arghh." It's simple, but well executed. Better to do so this way than to overshoot your abilities. And I am intrigued by the relationships that are popping up, although I do feel there could be more structure in the way of where the story is 'going'. You may have one all planned out for yourself, but sometimes it's important to give the reader something to aim for as well. Can't wait for an update ^^;
Sapsparrow13 2007-09-29 ch 9, anon.	abuseplease update. i have not forgotten your story.
Becca 2006-10-04 ch 9, anon.	abuseHey, wazup? Feel like updating. Sounds like a good idea. So what are you waiting for? Update!
EnChAnTeD-kOrEaN 2006-09-06 ch 9,	abusei'm sorry...i totally forgot to review...it was good...are there going to be any romantic progressions? w/ jerrold? or lord levin? update soon!
Munching Munchkins 2006-09-04 ch 9,	abusewill there be more??
Dev1234 2006-09-03 ch 8,	abusethis is a wonderful story and thats pretty much all i can say right now!
Becca 2006-08-29 ch 9, anon.	abuseI love this story! please keep writing. Are daria and jerrold going to "get together." Does Jerrold have another side to him or will he remain his snotty arrogant self? I like that you didn't make Daria into some gorgeous perfect girl. It makes it easier to relate to. i'm guessing this is a story about the king and queen before they were married. so when are things going to get better between them? Ahh! the suspense is killing me. Well, that and my annoying little sister. Update soon!
Bekahlu 2006-08-02 ch 9,	abuseI really lovethis story! It's not the same predictible plot. I'm just waiting to read more, ad try to figure out what happens next!! Great Job!!
calypsosun 2006-07-05 ch 9,	abuseI'm hooked on this story. Thankyou for FINALLY posting up the latest chapter. i like the way the story is writen and it has a very good plot. i cant wait to see what finally happens with all the characters especially between Daria and Jerrold so please update soon.
JustWriter2 2006-07-04 ch 9,	abuseAwesome chappie! I can tell that Jerold must have been manuevered into telling Christine that he likes Daria and she's trying to get them together. Christine and Jerold are definately best friends, Marsha is wierd as usual, which I like, and I love the fact that Helena was at least attempting to defend Daria. If Daria had liked him, then his words would have stung. It might be a good idea to copy and paste imporant lines of the whispering she heard during the ball to refresh your audiences' memories throughout the story. I absolutely love the idea of tying ones hankerchief to the lance of the guy you support. I saw the princess at Medieval Times in Florida do that for the blue knight. My family and I had the red knight while others had knights such as the black and yellow knight. It was really cool because it was a dinner and show thing that was inside this really cool looking, fake castle. I got one of those pointed, princess hats there. I visited this one. h t t p : / / w w w . a d v e n t u r e s i n f l o r i d a . n e t / M e d i e v a l T i m e s . h t m Here are locations of other castles. h t t p : / / w w w . m e d i e v a l t i m e s . c o m / 2 0 0 6 / l o c a t i o n s . h t m These videos are really cool and they might help with your story, especially with the horses. h t t p : / / w w w . m e d i e v a l t i m e s . c o m / 2 0 0 6 / v i d e o s . h t m Don't forget to delete the spaces in the urls I just listed. -JW`chan
Sarah 2006-07-03 ch 9, anon.	abuseHurrah! A fantastic update! I'm so glad, I love this story. Judging by the interactions with Lord Levin and Jerrold and the way Jerrold reacts to Daria, it appears that Daria is starting to occupy his mind more and more. Will the affections become more pronounced with Jerrold first, as Daria continues to be the only one that doesn't treat him as a perfect prince?
jessie 2006-06-29 ch 9, anon.	abusegreat story, i'm sorry i haven't reviewed for all the other chapters =/ so 4 months, eh? how far along is she? heehee i wrote that w/o thinking but that sounds like she's pregnant ^_^
overtheriver 2006-06-29 ch 9,	abuseYes, it has been more than FOUR MONTHS. -Stern look- However, I loved this chapter; things are moving along, aren't they? However, if this is a D/J story, I don't see any evidence of D/J, except for the bickering (which doesn't really count), and a few subtle tidbits in other chapters. And please, update sooner next time. :D
lemurperson 2006-06-18 ch 8, anon.	abusei like it. It is interesting. Please continue
Sarah 2006-05-23 ch 8, anon.	abuseI had forgotten how much I had enjoyed this story! I've just reread it and I love how you characterize Daria and I can't wait to see how you'll pair her up with Jerrold. Looking forward to your next update!

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