Hilarious. XD Not quite the Buddha that Kenshin and Misao envisioned her as, but no less capable of handling Saito. :P My favorite line was "I'm in the middle of killing this man..." and Tokio's response and Shibumi begging her not to go...Well, I guess that's three lines, but they were all hilarious. Excellent job. I enjoyed it very much.

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You're right. I love how casual she is about the whole thing. I'm glad I stumbled across your writing.

You said that this poped up in your head when tou had a cold... did you posibly have a very high fever to? Don't misunderstand me I like it vey much I just can't understand where you get this stuff from! You're a genius!

/Indusina

LMAO.

Pure genius. XD

thats so funny! great job!

LOL that was very cute

Oh, that made me laugh. Hard. I nearly wet myself. That's a keeper, yup, that's a keeper...

Hahaha. I have to hand it to you with that one. Couldn't have laughed any harder.

And in the middle of the humor, Tokio-Saitou interaction was lovely and shows the gems of a longer story needing to be written. ;)

That was bloody brilliant. It's a great scene to start with, and then...

"Hajime!"

"Oh hell."

And I loved Shibumi's lines to Tokio. I think the more serious the scene/character, the more fun it is to parody.

Well at least I wasn't cackling again, but my amused chuckles are getting me death glares. But, yeah, Tokio probably has Saito very well trained... :chuckle-snerk:

Very cute.

“Now, where was I? Oh yes... my character development monologue. AHEM You tame a man with money. But there is nothing that can tame a Miburo.”

“Except your wife.”

“Yes, fine—nothing except my wife. Happy now?”

“Not especially.”

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Great story, makes u wanna cry for Saito though *sniffing*

Wonder wat she does when she finds him smoking.

XDXD Kawai

really hilarious keep it going! hope it'll be much longer