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Scision
2007-03-22
ch 1,
abuselmfao XD that was a pretty interesting read. I love how they all seem united against James with all their responses..

"You need me more than chocolate, don't you, Moony?"
"Um, is that a trick question?" haha. hard question for remus :U

teehee i love the whole bodiless voice thing too. [:
DeNada
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseBodiless Voice warned, "Be afraid! Be very afraid!
Haha, I love this one. Very funny, made me good mood. :)
Terry
2006-03-04
ch 1, anon.
abusehaha very funny i really liked it so funny that is exactly how i imagine the marauders (i think thats how you spell it) to act except without the gayness but what the heck it is funy to stretch things!
rry
2005-12-16
ch 1,
abuseAH! A BODILESS VOICE! :huggs spoon: :looks around: oh i was eating icecream...CAUSE ICECREAM GOD!
Marth
2005-10-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI have some constructive critisism for you. maybe you could try fleshing out the story a little bit, like describe the scenery a bit more. It felt rushed with the story being mostly dialog.

Thank you for your time.
KawaiiMegami86
2005-09-25
ch 1,
abusebizarre, but cool! ::huggles::
loonyluna9
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuseOnce again, very funny. Had me laughing lots, lol. ^_^

-:-loonyluna9-:-
thequeeneb
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuselol...(snorts in an unattracive way)

my brain keeps on going this isn't love and this isn't war this is s e x >.< lol

funny wipes eyes i needed a laugh
...some one watches to much cartoon network though lol
and adult swim
XD
Onixknight
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuseHAHA! lol great start lol
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