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| Scision 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuselmfao XD that was a pretty interesting read. I love how they all seem united against James with all their responses.. "You need me more than chocolate, don't you, Moony?" "Um, is that a trick question?" haha. hard question for remus :U teehee i love the whole bodiless voice thing too. [: |
| DeNada 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseBodiless Voice warned, "Be afraid! Be very afraid! Haha, I love this one. Very funny, made me good mood. :) |
| Terry 2006-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha very funny i really liked it so funny that is exactly how i imagine the marauders (i think thats how you spell it) to act except without the gayness but what the heck it is funy to stretch things! |
| rry 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseAH! A BODILESS VOICE! :huggs spoon: :looks around: oh i was eating icecream...CAUSE ICECREAM GOD! |
| Marth 2005-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have some constructive critisism for you. maybe you could try fleshing out the story a little bit, like describe the scenery a bit more. It felt rushed with the story being mostly dialog. Thank you for your time. |
| KawaiiMegami86 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abusebizarre, but cool! ::huggles:: |
| loonyluna9 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, very funny. Had me laughing lots, lol. ^_^ -:-loonyluna9-:- |
| thequeeneb 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuselol...(snorts in an unattracive way) my brain keeps on going this isn't love and this isn't war this is s e x >.< lol funny wipes eyes i needed a laugh ...some one watches to much cartoon network though lol and adult swim XD |
| Onixknight 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseHAHA! lol great start lol |