Very good. I like it, and don't think there is enough stories about what actually happend to harry, or stories where there is another relative that he goes to that undoes the damage done. Keep it up^.^

Hakan Kurohi

It's funny, because I'm actually in the middle of fending off summer boredom by re-watching Buffy. All seven seasons. Right now I've got two episodes left of season 1 and I've skipped two episodes, one because I've seen it so many times and one because it freaks me out and I've seen it so many times BECAUSE it freaks me out. (The puppet one. <3)

ANYWAY, your story is really fascinating. Although I can't really go into detail because it's only the first chapter, but none the less I have high hopes.

Willow is exactly what Harry needs in his life. She was always one of my favorite characters from Buffy. I can't wait to see what happens when she introduces Harry to the rest of the gang. Or what her reaction is to Harry doing magic. I look forward to the next update.

Wow. What an amazing story. Dude, I'm speechless. I love this story already and can't wait to read more.

That was an excellent story.
From what you've written so far (despite the fact its incomplete) is probably one of the best, most believable pre-hogwarts abused Harry story I've ever read.
You have a tallent with words.
Its a shame though that you haven't decided to continue on with this story (or so it seems).
Its such a shame to leave all your hard work to waste by not finishing it... but hey, thats life.
Good story.
-Tom

This story is so sad, and tear-jerking! I love it all the same, though. You write wonderfully, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

question: is the song Willow sing at the end a real song or you made it? And if it exist can you tell me the title and maybe a singer who made a good version?


Then: i'm distressed by the date of the last update and can only hope to find more one day, because this story is good.

i love it. hope you do more soon. and you are not the only one who hates the dursleys(sp). good luck
Karakot

I love your story! please write more! I've always wanted to read a story about someone adopting chibi-harry and taking care of him the right way, but none of the characters in canon would do the job. i've only seen a couple episodes of BtVS, but willow sounds perfect for the job. And making harry artistic fits perfectly with my idea of how harry might have been like before the dursleys got too deep in his psyke, and the wizarding world forced him to act the way he does in canon.

I love the idea of this and can't wait for more. Really looking forward to Harry meeting Xander (how on earth will he react to his goofyness?) Update soon please.

Nice Story! Hope You Update Soon!

i can only say this one thing about this story

you are a literary GENIUS just as Rowling was when she made the Harry Potter series and i totally agree with this story's perspective little Harry needs a better family than the Dursley's
slightly ironic though his mother was a red head and now his new guardian is a red head once again excellent job

this story is so awesome! i love, love, love it! i can't wait to read more!
~Nessa

I don't usually like Harry Potter/BtVS crossovers, but I really love this story. The dynamics that Harry and Willow are developing are absolutely wonderful. I'm worried about her parents, but I probably shouldn't be. I can totally see the entire Scooby gang more or less adopting Harry as their younger brother, so I'm also really exicted to watch those relationships develop. Looking forward to an update!

This has been really good. I would really like to see more. Hope you write another chapter! Good luck!!