But no - he'd finally decided against it. They would laugh, criticize, ridicule . . . and that was possibly the last thing he needed.

-Unfortunately, in canon he's quite correct.

Sad to see him fall, though.

Well, I think it was a totally brillant piece myself. :D It was just too awesome for words in my option. :D

Prefect!

Just perfect!

except for the character(hermione)!

:)

Wow. Snape's my favorite character from the books and the HP movies, and this is one of the best Sev-angst stories I've ever read. Do you think you could continue this, please?

a desperate man can sob or plead, and i found this very nice. Sad, but thats the point isnt it? Love the part where he reaches out but no ones there... thats so sad... i love it!

That is really reminicent (sp?) of Dickinson. Really wel done. Excellent

Awww... *hugs Sevvie* Poor guy... Gah. I HATE that mood... before I went on Paxil, I was like that 24 hours a day... still am about twelve... rrrrrrrr... VERY good.

Wow, deep stuff. Poor Snape.

I can't be the only one who got an impression of Snape as a very depressed individual out of canon; hence, I can see this happening and being in character.

I like this one a lot. And I think it is in character; only, I tend to see Snape as more "human" than others (ie, my brother) do. With feelings, and that. Very cool.

Woah! You're going all DEEP again on me! Day-yam! Cool...write more now!

You can NOT leave us hanging like this! Please, please write more, or...I'll do something so terrible I haven't even thought if it yet!

This was really well written and extremely descriptive of the emotions portrayed. I enjoyed it, though it seemed a bit angsty to me.