And the song is... Love Potion Number Nine! Excellent story- I'm quite charmed!

My stomach hurts from laughing. Oh Lord. That was awesome!

Hi, I've been reading a lot of these fan fictions and I have to say that this is the funniest thing I've ever read. I totally love that song "love potion #9" and I think you did an amazing job incorporating it into the story. It was just fantastic. I couldn't stop laughing. Thanks for making it so enjoyable.

O...M...G!

i wish i had some of those laughing smilies here! i loved how you added in "I've disowned you, remember?"... babe could make a whole business out of that!

i'm still giggling here, see what you're doing to me?!

thanks guys- I think y'all need to tune in to an oldies station for a few days- and then you will "get" this story and where it's going:) (surely someone reading has 'gotten' it?):)

I have had a major situation hit irl this week- so I will update a little later than I thought- but I will update, probably one or two more sections. Thanks for the reviews:)

You definitely have to write more to this. I can't wait to see what David actually gave him. I'm thinking it's just a placebo to boost Zach's confidence in himself. Great start!

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! this entire conversation had to be one of the funniest things i've ever read! will we be seing some rather funny scenes of every single woman in Pine Valley going after him while Kendall remains immune, a la "Buffy, season Two?"

or, maybe, it's a fake potion?

"so, you're a flop with chicks?" hahahahahahahahaha! the potential is endless! "if i'd made it, there would have been fewer side effects"! you nailed dave's snarky jokes perfectly! i can't get huis snarky jokes all that well!