butterflymuppet 2008-09-15 . chapter 1good stuff! I wish it could continue- even if it was written like, 3 years ago =] |
Passionate with A pencil-FLAME 2008-05-26 . chapter 1wow. awesome in my opinion. |
angelps7 2007-04-21 . chapter 1lol really funny and cute and in character! although it seemed like the last sentence got cut off
"“Love you. That’s right not Krum. Not Diggory. Not Potter. Just you.” She cried and he kissed"
it seems like there was more, but i dont know. lol great story though!! :D |
LennonMcCartney 2006-08-10 . chapter 1 I agree with everyone...its great, continue!
The ending was rather abrupt seems more like a cliffie than a oneshot.
LennonMcCartney
(who was to lazy to log in and give a properly signed review) |
brona 2006-07-10 . chapter 1 sweet |
writerchick15 2005-10-23 . chapter 1Oh continue! Yes! |
Moony4Moony 2005-10-10 . chapter 1that was a rather abrubt ending. I wouldn't mind some more...if you're so inclined |
avchocaholic 2005-10-07 . chapter 1At least tell us what Fred did after she kissed him! |
akura b.w.f 2005-10-02 . chapter 1 this better not be a one shot. you got to continue |
Simple'n'Sweet 2005-09-28 . chapter 1 I agree with ms. comedytheater.
see theres my review: simple and sweet. Why? because that's my name.
posh, simple'n'sweet |
ms.comedytheater 2005-09-24 . chapter 1O! NO You have to add on. You have to go into detail about the kiss and what happened after it! Please please please! You will make me so happy if you do! |
almostinsane 2005-09-24 . chapter 1Great story! |