This was so cute! I really hope you add another chapter or two at some point. It'd be interesting to see Ichigo's reaction to her wild tales...and if she tells him what she was daydreaming about. :)

Lol, I was so disappointed that Orihime's fantasy wasn't true! It would have been OOC for Ichi, but still...

Well written, and Orihime and Ichigo were in character. The flow of the story was nice, too.

its really sweet! are you gonna write any more or is this gonna be a one-shot?
(im gonna put this on alert anyway..)

cool story

Awhe. Those last two lines really got -- that was so swet. Fantabulous job :]

I really liked that fic. Bravo!

Aww! That was adorable! I love how you described everything, the reason as to why Orihime was there in the first place . . . oh, wow. Especially her little day-dream, heehee. That seems a lot like her, doesn't it? And how you kept both of them very much in character the whole time. Great, great job. This is going into my favorites~

Yay! Another IchiHime writer! :D

My my does Orihime have an imagination.^.^

It would be awesome if you continue this!

-->Ayame

it was qutie amusing, i enjoyed it, wow classic yet original, lol good writer

Oh, poor Orihime. Unrequieted love's a beast.

Orihime and Ichigo making out while he has the flu... that's just gross. Hahaha, good thing it was all just a daydream.

You do an excellent job of catching Orihime's feelings for Ichigo, and Ichigo's complete ignorance of them. Bravo!

I like the last sentences, gives such a peaceful end for the short story. I'd be happy if you wrote more Bleach than Naruto hehe. Liked that story very much.

really nice!! continue soon!

Aw!! That was adorable! I loved it! I hope there is some continuation of this. =]

you're mean!It was only a dream!!