Awesome! I hate RaiKim, I read one story just to see (It was awfull) from what I can see that pairing doesn't require thinking because its been done so much that everyone else just decides it's easy no thinking involved, meanwhile someone who is a thinker will think of a better less obvious pairing and because they are a thinker will be able to make a better story. and you know what? it killed me to read what you said about Jack. Anyway nice story.

YAY! RAI REJECTED! I hate Raimundo. YAHOO! RREEJJEECCTTEEDD!!

So your a kimundo die fan YEAH YOU AND EVERYBODY ELSE WHO IS A KIMUNDO FAN.jackxkimiko are my favorite pair.

I feel sorry for you,It must been VERY hard to write that about Jack!Other then that cool story^^

Im faving this!

u should have had rai kill himself

You know, this actually made a lot of sense. Oh, and about that part about Jack, I KNOW she was just lying. The pause said it all. Go Jackimo!

you poor girl! *hugs you* it must have been tourture to put your self thorchure writhing that about jack!
JADE:-AH*hits rai sevral times in the shins with a crow-bar* DIE RAI DIE!
ME; WHOA!! i dont think your allowed do that-he's ina COMA!
JADE:...so? i put him there!
ME:..good point-DIE RAI DIE!
KIMIKO: *unplugs life suport and runs out the door with Jack, laughting*
ME:...and we didnt think to unplug it HOW?!
JADE: iduno...DIE RAI DIE!

I liked the story but...HOW COULD YOU SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT ABOUT JACK?!?!?!?!?!

Yes! Thankies I hate all the millions of Rai/kim fics here they are just annoying! This is good but I haven't heard of that CD before... Oh well but I like it!

No! what you said about Jack killed the BOTH of us...(lol) Just look at my username and you can tell. Pwease write more!

-Spicer's Apple-

funny, i aplaude you.

SWEETNESS TO THE SECOND POWER!

Okay then. Poor Rai. I used to like RaiKim, but I stopped reading those fics because there were too many of them and I was getting sick of them. Maybe if my computer was faster and wasn't timed, I'd read them! An interesting fic. I kind of liked it, but it made me feel sorry for Rai.

wow that was pretty deep...But I loved it I like the way that you know a song which u can relate to I do that all the time!!(thinking up short storys to go with songs I mean!)talk 2 ya on guild!

i loved this story, mostly because i stand stand raikim (there's way too much of it!) i thought the last paragraph was really funny! keep on writing your fics your awesome!

I love it! Really really really! *favouritifys* And you did the summary thing well, too. *has been listening to that CD all weekend*