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| TriStateCopFan 2005-09-27 ch 1,  | abuseI like this piece. A really good Alex POV on feeling slighted by Bobby's actions. And a good depiction of his somewhat "uncomfortable" reappearance. Nice job. |
| ElizaJane 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI hope this is going to have other chapters.I liked the way you had Alex acting all cool towards Bobby when she really wanted to greet him more enthusiastically.Please carry on.I've added it to my story alert list just in case. |
| Shellster 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseAwesome dude. Just the right amount of mysteouisnes...is that even a word? Anwyay, boss tale. Rock on! |
| gerfan 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abusegreat story, super, I like angst. you wrote characters really good. I was just wondering, is this a one shot or are going to continue it? Keep up the good work :> This is going on my Favorite stories and Story alert list. |
| netherfield 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWonderful piece. Tight, well-crafted and, though the relationship I covet is hinted at, blessedly devoid of sap. Wonderful, wonderful work. |