Reviews for Waiting for the Sun to Rise

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JesseTravisfan 2008-06-18 ch 10,	abuseHave you ever think about writing a new Diagnosis Murder/Jesse-story? This story is really good, one of my favorites here, and it would be very nice to read more your great stories!
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 10,	abusei would like to see more about how Jesse reacted to Mark and Steve, maybe a oneshot. it seems a little rushed, as everything seems almost back to normal and so suddenly. i would liked to have seen Jesse express soem anger or talk about how he felt about them and what they did. still... i loved this fic!
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abusei dont think the chapter was corny. i do beleive that Jesse listened to the voice in hsi head quite easily and follwed its advice. maybe he should have put up more of a fight, although it is also a case that the fight may have just left him... i cant wait to read the next chapter
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 8,	abusei dont knwo fully what you mean by: Is the cabin too dues-ex-machine-y? still i love this fic, granted the cabin seems a little cliched as it reminds me of the (was it season 6 episode, alienated?) but i reckon the gang will cop on soon enough to were Jesse is headed. i think Jesse needs to maybe go back to the confrontational style he had against himself, where he blamed God. also if he is feeling so suicidal, maybe a seen where he contemplates it but doesnt act on it, for some reason, say the fear of the unknown etc have i been constructive enough? how about a review on a review ;)
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 7,	abusehow can they save jesse form himself? i'm loving this story! guilt trip mark, steve and amanda...!
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 6,	abusebrilliant! jesse will survive and everyone will realise the truth! right?
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 5,	abusethis chapter proves his innocence. granted no-one knows that yet but still... i wonder when the truth is revealed how everyone will react...? cant wait
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 4,	abusepoor Jesse, at least Mark seems to have slight doubts. part of me fears this wont be the last time Jesse will see Tim. the horrible thing is that i could see this coming when he helped out Jesse... (too many prison films...)
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 3,	abuseit's a set up! it has to be, poor jesse, this is soul destroying!
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 2,	abusethey are all leaving him! they are going to feel so guilty when they find out about his innocence! he is innocnet right? i believe in Jesse, but i cna just see ou taking a big nasty turn with this, that would shock me...
101spacemonkey 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abusei dont think the word angst even begins to cover it. Jesse is innocent!
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!... 2008-04-03 ch 10, anon.	abuseI'm sorry I dislike it have much, but you have great writing skills! P.S. don't mess with the Jess!
eponinehugo 2008-03-02 ch 10,	abuseAnonymous reviewer get a life, Jesse is a fictional character for a start so there's no need for your insults and secondly the point of the story is that Jesse was indeed innocent and a victim. So he didn't commit the crime therefore the author has done nothing to offend you. Jenben, this story was so so so promising until the final chapter I sincerely hope you intend to revamp it and end it more profoundly as the rest of the story was excellent, very moving and exceptionally captivating.
DAT 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseso what up stupid, jerk face, what do you think about what dani and weirdo said we are working for them and i think tha t a ceritan Jewish motha is going to take a ** on your house there your 2 thousand that want to get you for this s-h-i-t!
DANI 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseYOUR A AND A HEAD AND A DICK SUCKER YOU SUCK . '' AND ALL THE STAR ON HERE MEANS I'AM CUSING YOU OUT WITCH WITH A B.

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