Very Sad, but beautiful.

aw, thats really beautiful, great writing.

Simply Beautiful.

Wow. You really nailed all the bases with this...
At the end, I really couldn't look away from the screen...

Fantastic writing. The strange chain of relationships seems to make sense here and everyone's emotions feel incredibly genuine.

That's what I look for in a fic, honesty and genuineness - you gave us that... pretty raw.

Thanks

Oh.

Haunting piece and you put so much into it but at the same time you didn't put in so much and I wish you had -- I wanted more. It was beautiful though, and I loved every word of it. Thanks for writing :)

Every so often, I go through the older completed Smallville stories to try to come across one that stands out. And your story really stood out. I'm not sure if bittersweet is the right word to use but I didn't expect it to be as emotionally impacting as it was! I don't know if you ever wrote any more to this story (which by the way is unbelievable that it was your first one). Is there any other stories that you have written? I'd love to read them.

your first one for smallville? you did a great job.

at first i thought it would involve a happy chlark, since the impression wasn't there yet that implied any relationship between clark and lois.

as the story went on, i started to have an inkling of where the story was going. but your execution at the end totally caught me by surprise; it was great.

That was really good. You seriously need to write more smallville fics.

that was really good. i liked it a lot :)

Ooh, really REALLY good. :) I actually just watched 'Superman' for the first time last weekend. Christopher Reeve was HOTT, btw. :) But this was really really good. Brava and all that. :-*

Bittersweet. Any story that has Lana not with Clark gets my vote. Nice transition piece from Chloe to Lana.

this story was damn near perfect-one thing really igged me-WHERE WAS PETE?...and why the hell is Lana pregnant with 'jeremy's child'?I love pete and I can't believe you left him out.
But hey,poetic license.
Loved it all the same,and it's now an official member of my fave stories list!

This was beautiful; eloquent and yet simple in its language. I can see this being the future for Chloe and Clark: the memory of the woman behind the Superman. Lovely.

That was so sad and so beautiful. I need a freaking hug now!

I really liked your story. The characters were believeable to the ones on the show, even better. It was sad but sweet. Looking forward to more of your stories!