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| stupid101 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseok wow...hope the rest is good! marlo:did u take in anything? me:um yes! marlo:wut happened? me:um ill be right bak!*runnes off* marlo:GTE BAK!*runnes after her* |
| dreamer 3097 2007-09-17 ch 12, | abusei love this story |
| Skeledoglover 2007-06-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this story. It's really good. This is one of my favorites now. But, one thing in chapter two. Johnny has black eyes. Big black eyes with a defeated look to them but I'm just a nut when it comes to small details like that . . . :) |
| Skeledog Lover 2007-05-27 ch 2, | abuseThis story is good. The ending is a bit anticlimactic but good. Sometimes in the person's POV they tend to tak in the third person. Otherwise it's really good. |
| Girlz-Rule 2007-02-21 ch 12, | abusegreat story! :) |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 12, | abusecUTE BROTHERLY LOVE... I LOVE this story an awful lot...I look forward to reading the next... |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 11, | abuseGAH! I hate JANET! I hope she dies!1 i LOVE THIS |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 10, | abuseNow Janet is gonna hurt STEVE@ When will this ** stop?!?!!?!? Darry should of killed her... |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 9, | abuseOk I don't think a real social worker would tell someone they killed people that weren't dead... meh, I still love it, and can not wait for more! |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 8, | abusewait...she raped him...is that what I'm suposed to conclude from this: "“I couldn’t stop her. I was so scared.” Pony finally got out. I felt tears flood my eyes. “Go ahead and cry Pony.” I told him softly. Pony shook his head, thinking he’d cried enough and not wanting to in front of us. “Dammit Pony, you can’t run and hide from this. You have to face it. I’m here, Soda’s here, we’ll help you though this.” My arm tightened almost painfully around him. “Soda and I will always be here.” Soda POV “Pony, we have four arms to hold you, you’re not alone.” I knelt beside them and together Darry and me held Pony between us as cry after cry ripped from him. “You cyan’t love me Soda. I’m bad now.” “No baby, you’re not. You’re still our brother and we love you no matter what.”" right? anyway, I love this series... |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 7, | abuseSteve and Pony are finally getting along... I can't wait to read more! Fullmoon tonight...this morning... |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 6, | abuse*whimmper* Pony's still hurting.. I really like this, it has a lot of emotion. |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 5, | abuseTuffman and Liegh-liegh sitting in a tree K-I-S-S... This is a SUPER story. |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait to read more...so I will... |
| xXxmysteryxXx 2006-07-11 ch 3, | abuseThe best part was the violence...defiantly the violence... |