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That was BEAUTIFUL!! I loved how it felt like a fairy tale you'd tell to a kid at bed time, but it was so descriptive and lovely~!

Very very nice.

I liked it very much. I also loved the companion *Serenity's Heritage: The Silver Crystal*

Wow i loved it! i think that u should continue. If u don't that's o.k cause this seems like a good ending .

wow. that was such a good story. great job!

how are you Arashi-chan,serenity heritage was the fanfic that first attract me to your fanfic and when i read endymion's heritage i was full of hope.the description of Gaia birth was very poetic and beautifully written.its show how Gaia actually know the earth because she knows that the lunarian and earthian will come to arms since they are soo different.its soo sad however that both Gaia and Queen Selenity had to sacrifice their lives for the happiness of their children.you've made the two of them come alive for me and i can feel the sacrifice they had to make and the pain of the king since his beloved wife dies.i think that is why endymion is soo serious because he feel that her mother has to sacrifice for him.i feel the emotion you are trying to convey and the sadness.i can't wait for you to write a fanfic on the meeting between serenity and endymion and please..please with a cherry on top..don't make it a sad ending.i can't take it if the two of them met a sad end.please tell me when the fanfic is complete because i'm waiting with bated breath

Aw so cute and really beautifully written. I'm going to go read the sequel now! XD

Gr….I don’t know how I’m feeling about these women being too inept to hold power…but I like how these powerful entities like Serenity and Gaia are born.
WAI! I love how the sigil on her forehead is explained. Nice work in finding a way to relate it to the moon.
I also very much like how Selenity is afraid of Gaia. Maybe this is just me, I’ve always been rather irritated by Selenity, for some reason. Maybe it’s because I’ve only see her in the dub.
Ew…feasted on many women?
Very creative what you have Gaia do to save her son. Also cool how she awakens souls from stones to take care of him.
Nice for a one-shot. Some dialogue and point of view might have been nice, rather than distant narration, but I can understand why you did what you did.
Looking forward to Sereniy’s Heritage (but want a new chapter of Kakera even more)

Absolutely LOVED your story!

I think I wanted more Endy. But I guess since this IS about his origins we can forgive that. *narrows eyes* Maybe.

Anyway, nicely thought out and well written. Sort of reminds me of a science project I once had to do.

Very nice, though.

wow
thats all i can say i suppose, but wow! this is amazing, the detail is perfect, and the idea behind the story is definitely one i have never thought of before. i cant wait for Serenity's Heritage! keep writing and update your other stories soon please. Thank you!

Oh... *starry eyes. -If you go on this way, my eyes shape change will be permanent-*
Nice, awe-inspiring hard work. It does have a poetic, legendary flavour. And all this tieing together the relantionships between characters since the very beginning.
Nothing to do with my 'moolight'o.0 (I SWEAR it was not my fault. On my Word file the spelling of it was fine. *sniff* About other mistakes, I can recall the extra 'l' in 'fullfilling/fullfillment'. Thanks for telling me, though. And for allitterating ^_^)

are we going to have another tale another night? I loved this story it was great u don't get much about Edymion or his powers so it was a great change

...no words. I both fear and respect you. The only thing I regret reading this was that I knew this was a one chapter story. b/c at the end, I am left begging for more.

This is one of the most detailed legends I've ever read. I was most impressed with the mythological finesse you put into it.