 AphroditesWar 2008-04-30 . chapter 40Fantastic!! A bunch of your chapters made me cry which is an amazing thing in itself...I like this version better than your other one but great job over all.
Peace, Love and Sex...Aphrodite. |
 AmazonRanger 2007-01-01 . chapter 40This was such a good story! I'm sorry that you're not going to continue...
The last one made me tear up! |
 Psycho Tangerine 2006-10-27 . chapter 40Wow, what an ending. So sad and yet so happy. Great job. |
 Psycho Tangerine 2006-10-27 . chapter 38That was cute. Welcome back. |
 angel17712 2006-10-25 . chapter 40gr...you made me have to sign in! LOL. it's cool! i just finished reading all the challenges for this one! they're awesome! and sad, and everything! i love them! i can't wait to see the next challenges! |
 pink-till-the-EnD 2006-10-25 . chapter 40I cried |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2006-10-24 . chapter 40*Cries* Beautiful, amazing... Loved it from beginning to end! |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2006-10-24 . chapter 39*Giggles* Aww! Amazing chapter! |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2006-10-24 . chapter 38Aww! Amazing chapter! Worth the wait! And on my b-day! ^_^ |
 Vespera 2006-10-24 . chapter 40Woohoo! You're DONE! DONE, done, done, done, DONE! And I'll bet it feels great.
You both did a terrific job with this collection. Kudos for a clever collection of insightful, creative vignettes. |
 TommyOliverMMPRFan 2006-10-23 . chapter 40Good stuff. The legacy lives on.
I can't wait for you to update some of your other stories. I've been getting by on some other good ones, and I'm thinking of writing my own Tommy/Kim fic (I've actually written my first chapter down but being a first time writer I'm a bit hesitant), but yours are the CREAM of the crop. Hopefully I see an update to the Great Power series, Galactic Strike Force (I REALLY want to see Tommy rescue Kimberly from Radiator Face and beat up Goldar in the process), and Trusting Starlight. |
 TripleJ3 2006-04-22 . chapter 37I really liked this story. I thought it was really cute. I like how both of you write, and I can't wait to see what stories you come up with next. Awesome job! |
 aquarius12285 2006-03-18 . chapter 37"Aachoo! Aachoo! Aachoo! AACHOO!"
Syd winced. God, even his sneeze sounded awful.
That was funny.
Aww! That was sweet of Syd to take care of her boyfriend while he was sick.
"I wish I could kiss you, but I don't want you to get sick."
*grins* It must be difficult for Sky not being able to kiss Syd.
"She ran her right hand through his soft tousled hair, and subconsciously, Sky leaned in and rubbed his face against her palm, causing Syd to stifle a giggle."
How cute! That was another touching scene.
I have a question. Are you done once you finish 40? I noticed that there's a volume two at Ars Amatoria. I was confused as to whether or not meant that the challenge was for writers to do both volumes one and two of the challenge. Either way, I'm more than likely to enjoy the work that you two do. |
 aquarius12285 2006-03-18 . chapter 36Another sweet chapter. You two have done it again. Sky holding a baby in each of his arms and Syd walking in on the three of them asleep was such a nice scene.
"Beautiful, so beautiful, just like your mother."
Aww! How cute!
"Coming Beautiful."
See, even the simplest of lines makes me gush when you two write it. One more chapter, and I'm all caught up. |
 aquarius12285 2006-03-18 . chapter 35Yay! Syd and Sky had one of each gender!
"Sky?"
No response.
"Schulyer?"
Again, nothing.
"CADET TATE!"
"Yes Ma'am?"
That was priceless! What a great exchange that was.
Aww! The end was touching. Even when you have them say "I love you" I go 'Aww!' What a drastic transformation I have went through courtesy of you two! I'm all gushy and stuff. lol. I'm going to read the next chapter now, which I'm sure you don't mind. |