Very very well written! I tried to think of who it was while writing, and I settled upon Sasuke thinking of Naruto...? In any case, it was a wonderful. Beautiful words.

Ooh, very interesting comparison. Very thought-provoking; nicely done. You played the words with wonderful simplicity.

deep little piece here, i like it.

this is a great peice of writing, and i enjoyed it immensely. I especially like the part where you wrote about the sun and the moon. A very nice touch. Well done!

*clap, clap, clap* bravo, encore, encore.