aww poor sirius that was so sad...it was really sweet this is sucha n interesting perspective poor dorcas and Kelsey I feel so bad for them though it seems like such a classic story its nothing like i've read before and its realy good even thoguh you haven't updated in ages please please please update soon
great job cheers
Lauren

I really like it! Not to be rude, but once I read OC/Sirius, I thought this would be mediocre, but you've outdone yourself.

Your writing is really realistic, of British boarding schools -I go to one myslf - but I can't help but complain that Hogwarts is special, and I'm not sure if such ** would have existed then.

Not complaining though, definate Fav!

Keep it up!

Gala

Okay, that's not a good enough excuse. A need for popularity is not good enough an excuse for her ... Trying to prove herself? By having sex with some rich twit? ErGH..!

I have suspicions that this 'guy' is Mary under a spell, just hoping to humiliate her.

This is not a good pair. All that keeps them together is conflict.

O gosh, I feel like crying again. This is such a good story, but it definitely has littles to do with the Marauder era. Its more just about teen drama than Hogwartz. A list students getting drunk and girls being snobby to the new girl.

They should probably just stay friends at this rate. You can be protective ofa friend. There is no passion, no chemistry.

Oh my gosh. You made me cry! Well, not cry, but have tears threaten to fall. That was as close as I've gotten to crying over a book since.. since Snape's betrayal. Bravo.!

That was genius.I loved how you described her as just a decoration for others to look at in the halls. What is up with Sirius? I love Dorcas. I thought you would make her ridiculously ditzy because of her name.

Well, the chapter didn't suffer from your writer's block. I thought it was great!

I never really get tired of these. Good Job!

this is a really good story...Sirius makes me want to cry...but they'll get together in the end...Right? Please? pretty Please? oh well, i guess i'll find out sooner or later, so please Update!please?

wow i like it!

poor sirius i really felt sorry for him

please update so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0on...

LilyXJames

wow. there are a load of adjectives i could use to describe this but i can only think of the word 'wow'.
it made me 'aaw' it made me frown and almost cry.

I don't like this story. I love your work in general and I thought this would get better, but it doesn't do it for me. I just think that the whole 'popular crowd' is an exploitation of Hogwarts as a location; we know from the novels that that sort of stuff most likely doesn't go on there. There's hardly a 'popular crowd' with parties where everyone gets **. I like Kelsey I think, but her need to be 'popular' annoys me, and I can't see past that. Sirius is great though, and the Marauder dialogues you've had. I think he is getting a bit too deep though. I don't know, I just hate it!