JapanManiac 2008-10-25 . chapter 1I will wait for you to updated this beautifully good story till the end of time! |
JapanManiac 2008-08-10 . chapter 43Really wish you updated this story since it was really good...
Man, what an epic adventure they all have! Oh, and it'll be even more interesting if you put V-Tamer too! Ken can meet another psychopath bent on conquering the Digital World except that Neo is crazy by birth and wasn't angsting like Ken does LOL! and Mimi meet Mari to the horror of everybody...! |
HarpieAna 2008-07-14 . chapter 43Some grammar mistakes and some OOC-ness, but it has a great plot. But if you want to divide scenes, you can put a line with Fanfiction's edit thing or just put a random character to divide it. All the same, it deserves a 9/10 for imagination. After all, imagination is what makes a story. ^^ |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-13 . chapter 43Awesome story so far. I hope you can update soon. I was just wondering . . . how much time has passed in the real world? It would have to be almost a year . . . I think. Then again, math is one of my weak points ^_^ |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-12 . chapter 33Still liking this story. I am actually half way through 34 right now, and its getting good |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-11 . chapter 27Still a good story. |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-11 . chapter 24am liking story so far. I like TK as ladyveemon. He plays the part well |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-11 . chapter 18I like the story so far |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-11 . chapter 14good |
Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-08-10 . chapter 3I have to say that this is an excellent story. Although, I noticed that in some sentences there are words just missing.
In any case, good story. |
freefall-gypsy 2007-06-02 . chapter 9luv it both you and the story are on my fave lists |
Frozen Twins 2007-05-28 . chapter 41Gomamon: TERRIERMON IS NOT A RABBIT. HE IS A TERRIER DOG WITH RABIT EARS GET IT CORRECT.
Betamon: and you call me touchy.
good chapter, but so many cliff hangers. |
Dragon Legend of Drake 2007-04-23 . chapter 40that was a funny way to end it update soon |
Shire Folk 2007-04-21 . chapter 39Wow, this chapter is good, five digimon on one side vs six digimon on the other. I actually have no clue who I wanted to win. Update soon.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You. |
Frozen Twins 2007-04-20 . chapter 39A few major errors, but very good action scene set up.
1. You underpowered MagnAngemon (so did second season)
2. Mary still in Action.
3. Betamon X: WHEN IN THE DIGITAL ARE YOU GOING TO BRING IN MICHAEL.
Gomamon: some commentary from the other kids would have been nice as well. |