Oh, my...that was wonderful! Hilarious! I demand more Freya stories! But...I almost feel sorry for Fratley. Any typos or oddities in this review are from my cat trying to get attention whilst I type. He is most dreadfully spoiled. Anyway,I must compliment you on every aspect of your writing. I'm going ;to use that saying tomorrow.
I don't know how many times I've read this little story, but I still find it funny and amusing even now. It's nice to see you've posted it on although I thought it would have recieved more attention than it is.
There was the odd grammar error, as I spotted an unfinished sentence in there. You might want to fix that.
I look forward to seeing some more Freya humour. I'll go and review you're other story as well soon.
HORK!