 Kaidaia The Run Away Advent 2008-03-20 . chapter 1very wicked chapter |
 roesbud 2007-08-19 . chapter 2i like your story hope u add more |
 Fire Dolphin 2007-07-13 . chapter 2please update soon. |
 Night Fire 2006-11-11 . chapter 2 Please write more, please write more, pawes write more SOON! |
 elendur-darkstar 2006-06-27 . chapter 2beautifully and powerfully written, please do continue as soon as possible, it's a wonderful read.
Thankyou yery much for sharing |
 Moonguardian 2006-05-29 . chapter 2... I'm so excited to see wat happens ... plez continue cuz I cant wait to see how things turn up... Great work love all ur stories... PLEZ CONTINUE SOON! |
 SachiNyoko 2006-05-14 . chapter 2Oh wow, an update for this story! ^^ It's still terribly sad, though of course I would expect as much since you did say it would be a rather dark fic. I, first off, would like to point off that your dates are a little off. In the first chapter the year was 1978, and this chapter it was 1976, which would make it one year and nine months ago. Yes, I notice weird things. ^^;
The way you write the scenes, like when all of the senshi died, the impact of your style is so emotional. Just the way you present it, it feels like being inside Usagi's head while everything is happening. It's really sad too. ;_;
I hope you can update this sooner next time, I'm really hoping to read more. The question about delving into Usagi's past is pretty obvious now, but I'm still wondering how you're going to handle the HP storyline as related to what happened. I can't wait for more. ^^ |
 Allison 2006-05-14 . chapter 2 This is so good!! i can't wait to see what happens next! |
 SachiNyoko 2006-02-15 . chapter 1Uwa, it's so sad! What a melancholy beginning, I must say, but it appears as though you're bringing Usagi back. Something to lookforward to. ^^
I noticed that Usagi has some history with all the Marauders, and Dumbledore knew she was the Lunarian princess. Will you be delving into her past at any point in the story, I wonder? I also wonder if the story will follow the Harry Potter plot of Peter framing Sirius and him going to Azkaban, so on and so forth. I s'pose I'll have to wait and see.
Sorry about your story being taken down, that's never cheery. Hopefully you haven't abandoned this story, because it looks like it could shape up to be something extraordinary. Plus, I have a flair for the angst/dark fics anyway, when they're done right.
Lovely piece of work, I enjoyed it. ^^ |
 Tenshi no Nozomi 2005-10-08 . chapter 1An interesting start, albeit a sad one. I have trouble with the scenario that Usagi beats Voldemort with most stories, but I'll get over it with this one since there were dire concequences. But I am confused, because in one paragraph it sounds like she's beaten him, but when Sirius promises revenge, I'm just not sure?
I'm not quite sure I understand where you're headed with this... It is just the beginning, after all. Will Harry still be born? Will Sirius still be framed for the Peter's death (and the death of 13 other muggles)? Will he still be sent to Azkaban? Or do you intend to make things entirely different?
The title's also interesting... "Bring me to Life." Does that mean Sirius is going to stumble on some method of resurrecting the dead (other than inferari)? I'm curious.
I'll keep my eyes open for more of this fic. I hope you continue it. I'm sorry that your other fic got deleted, it's a shame. Channel your anger and make something new (this fic) if you can. :) |
 Raining Blood Red Moon 2005-09-27 . chapter 1this is a great story so far. it was really sad but i liked it anyway. please tell me that serena is going to come back!! will she remember him when she does?? update soon |
 alexz 2005-09-26 . chapter 1 damn that was a great chapter please continue! |
 Flame Ivy Moon 2005-09-26 . chapter 1I love it! |
 Genie05 the second 2005-09-26 . chapter 1Actually I did something to the same extent in my story Broken Angel, but hey. I enjoyed it and I think you should continue on after all it takes more than Avarda Kedarva to bring a moon princess down. Reincarnation and memory loss those are the fun things! Update soon and you won't lose me unless you decide to not pair her up with Sirius. My one true favorite HP/SM couple!! Update Soon! |
 anon 2005-09-26 . chapter 1 Hi,
Interesting beginning. I admit you've got my attention. If you put up anymore, I for one will definitely be reading it.
Cheers |