When Maggot said to kill Victor, technically that would work...until Victoria dies, which would probably happen eventually. Where'd Victoria get the eggs?

I thought it was very well written and enjoyed it immensely.

LOL you really dont like Emily do you?
twas a good story i really enjoyed reading it

eep catfightsXD emilys scary

VxV! VxV! *does a dance around her shrine* YAY! Although I felt kind of sorry for Emily, I loved this chapter! VxV! VxV! *does another dance around her shrine*

Oh, thank goodness. I kind of like Victor/Emily stories and endings, but the last one was really sad when Victoria's heart was broken and she died. I liked the Victor/Victoria ending. In your face, Emily!

WOOP WOOP LETS GIVE IT UP FOR U*clap,clap*

I am really glad to see this alternate ending!

It would be nice to see the chapter rounded out a little though and Victor did seem to recover almost too quickly considering all he'd been through especially in the last few moments.

It can be hard to keep track of the plot when working with alternate story lines. Keep in mind that given when Victor and Victoria left for the Land of the Dead, the Everglot parents were evolving a new plan involving Lord Barkis meaning that the young couple might have further troubles to contend with back among the living before they could be married.

Anyway those are my only quibbles with the ending. Otherwise, excellent job! :-)

Yay! Victor and Victoria deffinatly belong together. Stupid Emily. ^-^

VICTOR AND VICTORIA ALL THE WAY

I hope this comment is not coming too late but I've only just come across your story. I would love to see a final chapter where Victor and Victoria end up together.

I love your story so far. It's rare to find one that is sympathetic towards Victoria.

I cant wait for your V/V ending... i hate seeing victoria die with a broken heart... i think that victor and victoria were made for each other... I LOVED your story great job!

Aah no! Make it VxV NOW! o.o

-is happy- Yay for V/V endings. That's my favorite too. I'm kinda getting angry with all of the Victor/Emily fics.

I don't think you should make an ending were no one gets him. Make a V/V one.

amazing... I loved it.

BRILLIANT JOB! That was .. o_O kind of sad! *squee...* Ohh.. I feel extremely sorry for Victoria, oh no... But brilliant writing, Hatori Sama! *gives you cookies and flowers* Now you must go and write the next chapter! XD Please please please with cherry on top? *puppy eyes*

~Elwyndra