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Aurorachan
2007-12-13 . chapter 4
no no, make the chapters longer!
UPDATE!
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-2d2la-
2007-11-06 . chapter 4
Haha ahh don't get rid of the fighting too quickly! Ah Pan pulling Trunks ear, I'd give anything to see that happening!! Lovein' the story. Totally love how Bra gave the whole 'I'm your best friend, You so should've told me like the momment it happened " speech. That is so totally right! Hell I would have done a bit more then that though I would've flew straight over there and slapped her silly! Wait I already have done that, just minus the flying hahaha. Get a new chapter up quickly, you hear! oh damn I mean PLEASE!
PockyisLife
2007-09-12 . chapter 4
please update!!
Pati101
2007-03-26 . chapter 4
wat cause her 2 do that?
marai pan
2006-09-13 . chapter 4
i love it. please continue. but i say you should give pan a boyfriend to make trunks jelous about. its going really well and i can't wait to read more.
Benny-JPanimeluver
2006-07-19 . chapter 4
Hey-hey. LUV the story! Gotta keep up w/the updating. There's really nothing that bothers me w/the writing so i'll just compliment you on the development of the storyline. This is written very well and i'm impressed. (although that really is much. i'm no author/editor. lol)Keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Marron hater
2006-07-17 . chapter 4
that was great! please update soon!
Chrissy
2006-07-12 . chapter 4
hi! I read this fic a while ago and I could have sworn that I had left a review for you! . . . well, anyways I realized that while reading this fic, I fell even more in love with the Trunks/Pan couple!! I laughed so hard while reading this!! It's so cute how they're always fighting . . . Yeah, great writter! Great Story! Please update soon!

~Chrissy
SeekerGirl17
2006-07-07 . chapter 4
Interesting story. I hope you update soon.
supersaiyanx
2006-06-30 . chapter 4
wow this is such a good fic, i hope that you update soon! You are really talented i cannot wait to find out what happens later in this story!
UPDATE!
Thanks
Blade Liger Knight
2006-06-25 . chapter 4
*holds award proudly* Well looks like it DID make the newspaper...and what was with that teacher anyway? Oy I'm wondering what will happen in that same class the next day? *pokes the future chapter 5*
AngelKitten23
2006-06-25 . chapter 4
I love Marron! She was such a cute little girl! This story is geting so good! I can't wait for them to admit that they like each other for goodness sake! Great job with this!
Goddess of the Moonlit Sky
2006-06-25 . chapter 4
Loved it!
AngelKitten23
2006-06-24 . chapter 3
Gasp..Trunks and Pan are kinda cute! I never really thought of them as ever being a couple, but you've turned it around to make it fit. I'm glad you updated, it was like torture waiting for this chapter! Can't wait for your next update!
ladybugg
2006-06-19 . chapter 3
This is cute, and I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Pan and Trunks get into.
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