Aw! I am so glad I decided to peek at this fic, I saw that it hadn't been updated in a while and was afraid I would become hooked, but I saw you had updated so let me dance *dances with joy*

I hate writer's block o_o I'm glad you got out it enough to post this chapter...
It really is turning out to be very interesting and I do hope you continue it!

Thank you so much for sharing your story.

Loves & Hugs :D

STC

Aw, this story is developing nicely! And Monk is being nice, albeit himself (I think that word works there). Please continue this story! And thanks for reviewing my very late update on mine! :)

Oh, Jeez... Does Ivette know Monk saw her?

you were right when you stated previously that your story would have me laughing. I could almost picture the events occuring my head as they happened in the fic. Very few writters have that such ability. However there was one little thing I noticed.

Every once in a while you'll have an extra . and it almost sounds like you didn't space . Maybe you should try reading your chapter aloud to help catch tiny detals that will help inprove your writting.

Oh...

I like the way you developed this story...
Monk is written in character very well (did that make sense?)

Keep writing!!

:D
MiSHa

How nice Adrian is in this chapter, taking the maid into his home! Of course he doesn't need one, which makes it even funnier! I can imagine his response to Natalie at the beginning of this chapter, and to Ivette at the end of this chapter! Please continue soon!

Monker's Chappy Highlights:

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1) He remembered those few times when his beloved late wife would cry. He remembered when an aunt of her’s he had never even heard of died. As soon as the phone call from her mother came, she had fallen into his strong arms, crying into his chest. He had wrapped his arms around her tightly, as if to block out anything else that would cause his precious Trudy to feel more pain. He would have given the world to prevent her from ever being that upset again.

I loved this part. I love any flashback sort of thing that show love between Adrian and Trudy. It was touching to see Monk comforting his wife that way. (even though I didnt exactly SEE it. I pictured it anyway).

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2) Natalie’s eyes welled up with tears and she placed a hand over her mouth. She pushed herself up on her knees, flinging her arms around Ivette and pulling her into a tight hug.

I liked reading this. I can picture Natalie doing that, it seems like the perfect thing to have her do at that point.

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3) Monk’s eyes widened in embarrassment for intruding on Ivette’s shower preparations, and quickly closed the door and went back to his bedroom, face crimson red.

Ahha...I found this funny for some strange reason...unexplanitory (if thats even how you spell that dumb word)

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All together...I loved this chapter (better then the first one). I liked how sweet Adrian was (again ;o)) cant wait for an update (HEY I RIMED!)

Oh my, I was right... How is Monk going to deal with this? There's no way he'll be able to talk to her about it without feeling dirty or violated or something, considering sexual stuff really bothers him already.. I hope you update this soon so I can see how Adrian's going to handle this...

This is a good first chapter. Is this going to involve a rape? That would be a new thing Monk would have to deal with...

Aw...poor Ivette.

Once again...very well done my friend.

I know its anoying to get reviews like this but I'm gonna say it anyway...I wish it was longer. lol Make the next chapter a bit longer if you can.

I love this story...you are writing it perfectly. I cant wait to see Monk's reaction.

Wow! Nice beginning! i love monk too! My story is called 'What happened to Trudy?" Please R&R! I love you putting in the theme song. SO CREATIVE!
Sme-kc-dm-fan
PS- you spelled breathe wrong. you said breath. just thought youd like to know. ;-)

Oh poor ladies. I feel so sorry for them. Please dont leave me like this. I have to know more. As always I love the idea of putting the theme song in the opening chapter, adds more effect I think.

Very well writen as always and very suspenceful (if thats even how you sell that dumb word)!

I am enjoying it very much and cant wait to read more...soon! (hint, hint. wink, wink. nudge, nudge.)

so far so good- i am already enjoying it- but how in the heck can you write a monk flick and NOT have it involve romance-- after all this is " the Monk' you are talking about-- ok- i will press my way though and read- i know i will enjoy it-