I love this story, you are such an awesome writer.

hali :)
én már elolvastam Az Azték Incidens-t és, naggyon jó volt!
Tudod, angolul nem értek (még...) jól, nem tudnád ezt magyarul is fölrakni?:D Léci!
Vagy van valami másik AF-es írásod?? Szívesen elolvasnám!:)
Akkor válaszolj könyi!
szija XD

(rapturous applause, hooting and stomping of feet all round!)

Another masterpiece! That was one hell of a ride you put me through, and I have to say, I enjoyed every minute of it! :-D

It's a shame you're not doing a third; we could've see how little Diana grows, which would have been great... As well as, of course, been blown away by your incredible plot twists and wonderful writing style. (sigh)

Ah well, you have to make do with what you've got, I suppose... Luckily, what we have are two of the greatest AF fanfics ever written, classics that will stand the test of time; and for that I'm eternally grateful. Thank you!

The Doctor

i did not read this book past Holly's Kidnapping i probaly will... but not tonight, i'm going to read the aztec incident

I have my right eyebrow raised (ecause I can do that). I have read ALOT of books and have been almost obsessed with three series's Harry potter was the first but the least obsesive, yhen came The Saga of Darren Shan which was second (if you havn't read these books than you should!), and the latest and most obsesive is the Artemis Fowl series.
As I mentioned earlier i have been ALMOST obsesed with them and for a whilei thought that i was they had good characters with a hint of romance and in the saga of Darren Shan a fair bit of horror (I love anything horror espeacally when the main characters evil!), AgiVega showed me how compleatly and utterly wrong I was, this... side series to Artemis Fowl has everything i love with an extra dollop of romane which makes the books all the better, a pity there are only two of them i fell like making a fanfic of a fanfic!

Great stuff! I don't usually review in the middle of a story that's complete, but I just wanted to mention that it's spelt "Franz" Joseph (I'm sorry for being picky - I've just been studying this bloke in history!)

Right, back to reading this wonderful story... :-D

The Doctor

Amazing story! I was cheering in quite a number of places, and kudos on good birthing practices (I'm going over human development notes, and what leads to a better childbirth-daddys being with mummys (or other significant others!)
And overall I loved this story- you've outdone yourself with it and outshone everyone as well!!
Thank you so much for giving us the most enjoyable read in a heck of a long time!!
(Don't suppose there's any chance of another sequel?

Ah, Bravo. At some points during that FanFic, I alternated between yelling incoherently, welling with tears, laughing until I couldn't take it anymore, and almost throwing my Laptop at a wall in frustration. You made it good in the end though. Delaylah, on the other hand, was just plain horrible. Minerva Paradizo and her go hand in hand almost, except for the little gang member detail. All in all, a well written, and interesting story.

(Mulch1 and Mulch2 ? Do I sense a Dr. Suess referance here?) =D



Stonekipsta -

You fixed it. Apparently, I'm not the only one that can't stand a sad ending. I didnt cry cried the way you mentioned, but i did get pretty sad when i was writing a FanFic about the "Percy Jackson and The Olympians" Series. Perhaps you've read them? Anyway, I stupidly killed off all the main characters (i.g. Annabeth, Grover, ect..) and had only Percy left...and I killed him too.

I will never write FanFiction again. Don't have a talent for it. :(

Stonekipsta

WOW

You just ruined Artemis's life.
"He never felt so used. Humiliated. Abused. Practically raped."

Add this to the fact that his TRUE son was never born?

Dang.




Stonekipsta

AH Ok even i have to ask: How's this gonna turn out ok now? Sad endings make for sadder readers, you know :(

I could respond to this Chapter in very many ways:

How could you!?!?!!

That's just cold...

Why?

I hope this is fixed.

But, since I am not the author, I'll trust your judgement. :( (Patrick was my favorite character so far too...)

Whoa, Major twist!



Stone-to the -kipsta

wow...9 months...and I read it in less then an hour. Of course, I'm still glad you persisted to write this FanFic. I'm sure I speak for all who have read this chapter when I say: Thank you. :)

Well done on another well written, and creative FanFic, Agi.

If I had half the creativity you and other FF writers do, I might be able to write one myself :)

"I don't have a crush on Juliet, really! That was just...dunno. I was in a shock. That girl's mad!"

Only one way to describe that: LOL