And what the fuck is this? You took long enough to update it, and now... I had to take the time the read it again just to update myself! Not that I mind, no. Move faster. Get inspiration. Watch reruns!

It was awesome! My only critism is that it was a little confusing at times but after re-reading those parts I understood it. Other than that I loved it. You're really talented so keep writing. :D

Hey I've read Brotherly love and this and you should keep going update please. Your really good at writing i mean i would rather sit here all day the watch the show (which i've done) It's addictive and you really should keep writing.


I know this prolly isn't what you like in reveiws a girl babbling bout how good you are so i'll stop just... PLEASE KEEP WRITING

I know you are busy working on The Marks of the Four, but don't forget to come back to this one. I need to know what happens next. ^_^

I love your stories. please update this one soon

Are you going to continue? Please do...

this is good.

who is he?

Wow, I really loved your story. It showed the reactions of all the characters really well. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Keep up the good work! I loved Brotherly Love as well.

great chapter!

Great story! Update soon!

My brother is an asshole. He locked me out of on a school computer now.I just want to let you know that I miss your storys and haven't abandon you of my own free will.If I get a chance to read,I probobly won't be able to review.I am sorry,so sorry.Goodbye,Elenea Galad.

I think I remember this fic.
Zuko: It's been such a long time.
Me: Yeah, anyway. It's starting to come back to me now. So anyway, great chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Until then. Later. K15

Very awesome chapter. I'm still like uber confused, but awesome nonetheless. More soon please and thank you.

Me: interesting chapter...
Lena: so interesting...i actually read the whole thing this time
Me: ...
LEna: lol jk i always read it. update soon ;]