Awesome! keep writin!

Interesting start. Please write more!

'Not Hammer. Or anything like it." lol
Nice. The story really captures Lavi in all his . . .um. .Laviness. Which is a good thing.
Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
Tithe_fey

I like your Lavi. He has ADD. xD

He thought Kanda was a girl?! *Laughs* Oh God Lavi, you crack me up!!

i liked it

Wow! Sugoi! That was a great version of Lavi's past, loved it alot!! ^^V

i love this so much!!

I like this! please continue!! although It's Kanda not Kandha XD

Hahaha. How nice! Really! I love this fanfic. Thanks for sharing your imagination =D!

Amazing.

Dialog captured expertly.

nice story...*i love rabi*

A History of Rabi! Huzzah! I am very well pleased because Rabi's my favorite character. Must be the mischevious puppy-dog eyes and penchant for hot sexy nurses. I hope there's a continuation to this, it'll be quite interesting. The part where Rabi called Kanda a "pretty lady" was so...him. I hope nothing er, strange happens in between them though! More Rabiness!

wow great story I loved it, dont worry Rabi everyone thinks Kanda's a girl at first ;)

aww, this is cute. interesting way to say how Rabi lost his eye. and also interesting interpretation on how someone gains their Innocence.
hee, and Kanda's there, too.