Interesting! Great work!

Poor Ami-chan ;_; I love love love it, I hope you write more soon! And no, it's not too technical at all.

o kool! rocking story! i love puffy amiyaumi. i dont think youre being to technical:) plzz update soon

Good?...

You're story fine it's got to a great beggining. But you should prbably make more chapters telling about yumi trying to find a cure

Nice chapter.

Also,you said that you wish there was a HHPAY spot here.

Great news:THERE FINALLY IS!

It's great, Yumi-chan! It's just that you're doing the exact opposite of what you've feared to do; you're being too simple. Expand the chapter a bit, if you can.

A very cutesy story. Looking forward to seeing how it ends _

/'but I wish there was a Puffy amiyumi spot on this site'/

O Me too! I must write a fic one day too! Hopefully we'll get one soon!

A short but-straight-to-the-point chapter.

Not bad so far, can't wait to see what it turns to with this!

Short sweet and 2 the point. I'm liking it! Please update within three days or I'll bite off your head...seriously.

This is pretty good. Plz update soon

Hm, not bad so far. Short, but gets straight to the point at least!

I am hoping that Chapter 2 comes soon!