Wow indeed wow this story line is great but were is chapter six and so on. You write very well and the story about goku having a second brothers that he's a year or two older than. That's great but we need more to the story like what happens to turles on his mission freiza sends him on. Or does radditz get prince vegeta to set his father and fasha free. What happens next.

Very good story! I really like it! But just out of curiosity who's Goku's and Raditz's mother(s) or is she or they not going to play a part in the story? Anyways I think it's about time you update! It's been five years now! Anyways I hope you do I am definitely adding this story to my favorites list!

Update Soon!

This is an awesome story! I like how everything ties in together. I realize that it's pretty old, and that you have a bunch of other stories out now, but could you please finish it!

Yay! A turles Ficcie! U and Me are like the only peeps who write fanfics about him!

Great story so far! Can't wait till u update! And when is Frezia ever in a good mood? _-

This would be better if it was a alternate universe with "KAKKAROT" instead of "SON GOKU".

Radditz's actions make me wonder what his true intentions are, and it's interesting that Zarbon/Turles kinda/sorta have some sort of respect for each other; or from Turles' perspective, anyway. I have a feeling I know where this story is going, and if it does, this fic will turn out even greater than it already is. I really, really like this! Continue this soon! Oh, and when IS Freeza ever in a good mood? *lol* Keep it up.

Freiza is never in the best of moods, but i am so looking forward to the next chapter! i like this story, a lot. have i already said that?

Oh, Freeza is just sick! But, I can see him and Zarbon torturing someone like that. And it's interesting that you almost had Bardock go SSJ ... Yep, very interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more, especially after this chapter. Keep it up!

Hey . it was lovely! the math confused me though... i'll just accept that you know what you're talking about . excellent work, can't wait for the next part!

Good story, I hope you continue.

WIRITE MORE!

Oh cool ... A Turles ficcie! I find myself obsessed with him sometimes (more specifically "his" movie) so you know I had to read this! Very interesting, so far. I don't buy the whole bit that Turles/Goku look alike because of the "third-class Saiya-jin" bit, but I don't know if I accept them being brothers, either. *shrugs* Anyway ... Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to reading more.

Wow, this is really interesting, I can't wait for chapter 4! Keep up the great work.

SSG