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cassiejennahermione
2007-01-10
ch 6,
abuseAll right, I admit it, I skipped the Mudshipping and Flameshipping. I loved the Softshipping, though (Felix/Mia). The Windshipping was decent, but I never imagined Sheba as the adventurous type.
Hawki
2006-12-11
ch 4,
abuseIt's ok, but the pulse tends to alternate, disrupting the flow.
Hawki
2006-11-24
ch 3,
abuseShort and sweet. As for KayxFelix, I call it Flowershipping. Kay likes flowers and Felix can use his earth psyenergy to help.
Hawki
2006-11-24
ch 2,
abuseSimple, sweet story. Still, not through any lack of quality, but the MiaxFelix was probably better. Story fics are good but limited in meaning.
Hawki
2006-11-18
ch 1,
abuseInteresting plot twist at the end, although I felt your portrayal of Felix was a bit harsh. Oh well, it made for good contrast.
thechenster
2006-11-17
ch 1,
abusewow that was pretty nice. i have to admit i was half expecting him to be alex, lol. i have to say i'm impressed with the flow and nice rhythm. i know poems are so hard to compose...at least for me they are -_-
anyway nice job!
unicornmaddy
2005-12-27
ch 5,
abuseThat was so cute!
FanKnight
2005-12-27
ch 2,
abuse=.=;; ok now I feel bad for harming ye with the spork...but no more felix/mia!! >< tiss gross and uncalled for!! x.x *casts potent cure* o.< feel lucky!
FanKnight
2005-12-27
ch 1,
abuseCYNIC! *stabs several times with a spork* >< BAD !
Star wars makeover
2005-12-20
ch 5,
abusehm...these are all good but the first was still the best
blackarrow92
2005-12-11
ch 5,
abusei have to say im not usually a fan of your work, since you usually write mudshipping, but this poems are pretty good. try writing a valeshipping one. it would be interesting to see a mudshipper write valeshipping.
Mesoforte
2005-12-10
ch 5,
abuseAnother poem? The streak continues.

Another good one.
Spirit Seer
2005-12-10
ch 4, anon.
abuseNice one! :D
Spirit Seer
2005-12-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseOkay, I didn't expect that! At first, I thought that it was talking about what Jenna and Felix went through, but then you definitely shouldn't have a pairing with them, because that's just wrong! Good poem! I honestly didn't expect it to be JennaXGaret
Spirit Seer
2005-12-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseAw, that was so romantic! :D
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